Depression
Depression
When you lose your inner light
and intensifies the ongoing fight,
Days and nights seem to merge,
Emotional outburst is at its verge,
In absolute darkness you get lost,
solitude takes over, the ultimate ghost,
Missing few beats, the subtle heart sobs,
tears of sorrow fail to nurture throbs,
Successive thoughts pull you down,
whirlpool that ensures you drown,
Logic of life, death and suicide,
end to all grief, desires and pride !
Written August 6th, 2015
For contest "Mental illness" by Nathan D
Inspired by emotions shared by a young patient in twenties who went into depression as his beloved wife died.
Now entered for contest "Any poem trashed in a recent contest" by Broken wings
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