Premiere Contest WinnerDepression

DEPRESSION 

                  Depression is like a hole in the ground
                    that sucks you in a different ground,
              where it's dark, no matter what time of day
                and you're alone, night and day, to stay.
  
                  It invades and ravages your mind.
                         It distorts your thoughts
                   and disrupts your way of thinking.
                  It numbs your senses and feelings.

                   You have no idea how depression
               steals your joy, your control, your soul
                    and how it robs your well-being,
                    for you become empty, helpless
                   and start questioning your being.
 
                        You are there physically;
             however, you are not really there totally. 
       You look at the well-meaning people around you;
          but you feel they are not really there for you,
                     for they have no idea, no clue
                     of what you are going through.

         For some, they are able to get better overtime,
            as time heals, and are able to cope again.
            For some, depression turns into addiction,
              as they get addicted to the medication.

          For some, they choose the path that is deadly,
as for them, there is no love, no emotional support, no money,
             no pills or medication, no rehab or therapy
              would cure the overwhelming melancholy.
  
                Nothing will make it wholesome again,
               nothing will let them see the light again
for all they feel is the sadness and all they see is the darkness
       and they are stripped of hope and take their own lives.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Ibeh Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 7:56 PM
Having gone through a bout of depression before, this excellent, powerful piece resonated with me. Depression is no joke! It's a total nightmare to endure. By the grace of God I'm still here, not every sufferer see the light at the end of the tunnel unfortunately. Congratulations on your trophy win, Marilene!:-) You should like my personification Depression poem. It's on page 3. Blessings to you! <3
Evans Avatar
October 29, 2020 at 9:46 PM
Thanks so much Edward. I did read the one you wrote. There are just so many out there suffering from this disease. I'm glad that you overcame this disease for it tears you to pieces.
Chamberlain Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:08 AM
A really powerful poem, congratulations on your win. :-)
Evans Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:10 AM
Thank you, Joanna. Have a great day.
Radice Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 1:25 AM
Congratulations on your win Marilene. I dont suffer with depression but have nursed people who do. I understand totally your choice of words in your poem. Certainly the worst thing anyone can say is "Get over it" yet I heard so many families of sufferers say it. To all except the sufferer, depression is invisible.
Evans Avatar
October 8, 2020 at 8:09 AM
Thanks so much, Gary... the families of sufferers could say, we're here for you or just silence with sincere smile and a hug and lots of prayers.
Roper Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:08 PM
Great write , Marilene, in Linda's contest. Congratulations on your win.
Evans Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:37 PM
Thank you, Eve. Have a good night.
Kauffman Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 8:44 PM
Marilene the images of your poem are so melancholy - a vivid picture of this horrible disease. Congratulations on your first place win.
Evans Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 9:04 PM
Thanks so much, Sam. Yes, it is a horrible disease. How I wish people who suffer from it, would get out of it.
Allison Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 6:03 PM
such a powerfully composed piece, after seeing PD's Mascara poem I can see why this was chosen for a very well deserved trophy win, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx
Evans Avatar
October 7, 2020 at 8:38 PM
Many thanks, Jan! Its sad that Depression takes lives. I always wonder why, especially with successful ones who have them all?? One of life's mystery.
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