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Depression

I have fallen into a very deep well Where darkness and despair do dwell. There's slime and mildew on the wall How I got here...I don't recall. Somewhere I hear water trickle The sky above, no bigger than a nickle. For when you're in a well so deep All you do is sit and weep. You wear the darkness like a cloak Touch the pieces of a life that broke. You and the darkness become as one There are no reasons left to run. Up there people are having fun Loving and laughing in the sun. They do not hear my inner plea Do not see the cold in me. As the walls pull closer still Somber memories my heart do fill. For in this well I cannot win You see the darkness...is within. So I curl up very tight Await the passing of this night. Maybe in the early dawn I again will be reborn. This poem inspired by a book that I read. Clinical depression is a devastating and often misunderstood disease. HB

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Date: 6/5/2009 12:24:00 PM
Such insight shared in such a creative way. I hope you will be posting more of your poetry soon. Thank you for your kind words on my poem. Blessings to you. Have a wonderful day. Karen
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Date: 11/13/2008 4:51:00 PM
Hello Heidie. Just stopping by to say hi, and that I miss you and I am hoping all is well. Want to wish you and yours a happy Thanksgiving soon. Hope you stop by before too long. Love & hugs, Shar xoxo
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Date: 7/29/2008 7:24:00 PM
Depression is nothing to enore. lots of people say oh stop feeling sorry for your self, and the problem is deeper than that. I get depression it comes and goes, so i can relate to this poem. thank you for reading my poetry and for your comments
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Date: 7/12/2008 2:12:00 PM
Depression, I have gone through this horrible demons path, and it is so lonely there. I am much better now, only because I called on someone to help me, He showed me sunshine, laughter, and an escape route... My day of freedom is very close...I live with an alcoholic, I am selling my house, and then I will leave here. Always, Christy
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Date: 7/8/2008 8:32:00 PM
A nice glimmer of hope at the end of the poem. Greet the "early dawn". Nice work Matthew
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Date: 7/8/2008 7:44:00 PM
Depression can be a frightening illness, especially with all the misinformation out there. Your vivid portrayal should aid in helping others understand how devastating this disease can be. Good insight. Thank you for sharing your thoughts with us and for your kind words regarding my poem. Best wishes. Karen
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Date: 7/6/2008 3:43:00 PM
Hey, Heidi. I truly feel this masterpiece, as it spills onto the page like a teardrop. Excellent imagery and there is so much emotion. I hate the holes, but they usually come for a reason - almost like a growing spurt or something. I had one a couple of days ago, infact. It sounds as if the one who is depressed is empathic. There is a way to guard it, thank God. Peace to you my friend. Love, Ivy
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