Depositoria - Banks, First

drop a penny in the slot, drop it in the hole
”penny saved, penny earned” also “good for soul”
my first piggy bank
was tough like a tank
until a hammer withdrew the whole
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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Hoffman Avatar
November 9, 2016 at 7:15 PM
My piggy bank was a big glass jar which I dipped into too often, lol! Cute deposit/withdraw limerick lim'rik!:)
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November 10, 2016 at 5:17 PM
yeah, saving was a concept I couldn't seem to grasp:-) cheerios! ~ j
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November 9, 2016 at 9:30 AM
My first bank was a Barbie, there was no hole, they're not anatomically correct. Kidding! ;)
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November 9, 2016 at 10:56 AM
Now you have me giggling out loud. :D Pyrotechnic poet, ha....! If there's a lim'rik in there, you can write it!!
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November 9, 2016 at 10:18 AM
Thanks! Now I've splattered oatmeal on my computer screen! :-):-):-) Note to self: empty craw before reading volatile replies from the pyrotechnic poet. First bank of barbie! Still laughing, must be a lim'rik in there somewhere!
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