Departure

if you should leave go in quiet tones lest you stir up past inequities And open the storms of anger which will whip up the winds of hate then the thunderstorms of guilt will ensue it may best to leave before this hurricane is due

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 8/19/2013 2:00:00 PM

Good idea..Congrats on your win..Sara

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 8/16/2013 5:04:00 AM

congrats on your winning spot Joseph xx

Shadow Hamilton

Date: 8/15/2013 4:46:00 AM

what fine truths in this Joseph tip toe softly. congrats on a fine win Shadow x smiles

Poet. Undertaker

Date: 8/15/2013 12:45:00 AM

congrats.great win. (:c Jenish

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 8/14/2013 5:36:00 PM

wow! Love the Avatar... Joseph, , ~CONGRATULATIONS~ . thank you for the awesome entry. When you have time enjoy the winners on my XOOL blog * Called "Just For You" http://www.poetrysoup.com/poetry_blogs/blog_detail.aspx?BlogID=15796&PoetID=18720 Take care --- xox~ Linda

Joseph May
Date: 8/14/2013 7:59:00 PM

thank you for my placement in your contest Linda...I llove your avatar too...hugs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 2/10/2013 11:03:00 PM

wow, I really really like this one. One of your best, Joseph!! Using forces of nature was awesome.

Joseph May
Date: 2/11/2013 6:06:00 AM

thanks Andrea ,,,,hugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/21/2012 3:40:00 PM

Agree with you in the last line - Well done ! - oxox hugs Anne-Lise

Joseph May
Date: 8/14/2013 8:00:00 PM

thanks Anne

Charmaine Chircop

Date: 3/21/2012 2:04:00 AM

Silence is golden on rainy days,departure diamonds to hurricaines.. Yes sometimes its better to depart quietly when the winds hit high.. great message-ChARMA

Joseph May
Date: 8/14/2013 8:00:00 PM

thanks Charmaine