Dentistry and Reflections

The dentist and Reflections 

Up there in the continuous darkness of the universe 
I saw a streak of light... a dying comets last hurrah.
Bedroom very dark couldn’t sleep too much death 
for one night. Got up and read an article that plants 
speak to each other. “Warning a heavy footed man 
is coming your way.” “Duck a lawn mower is at large.”
Amputated roses and tulips chafes in a vase kept
alive for a few days... admire beauty in death agony. 
Carrots screaming in distress when pulled from soil...
 good for your health, dieticians says.
Everything we like, what we eat are, hurting plants 
and animals. Which, reminds me I’ve an appointment 
with my dentist tomorrow, gardener of my glum teeth,
he will speak softly as he pulls up out another tooth.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Collins Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 7:19 AM
It is said a dying comet brings the tooth fairy.
Hansen Avatar
April 21, 2012 at 7:35 AM
thanks Kathy I didn't know that
Bauer Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 6:09 PM
i like the way you slowly brought us to your dentist appointment - very creative!
Hansen Avatar
April 20, 2012 at 1:53 AM
thank you iLene
Brown Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 1:35 PM
The sun is shining bright here this afternoon in Ohio and I am enjoying reading some very interesting and outstanding writing. So happy to see yours among the ones I am able to read this fine day before I get busy. Have a wonderful day and thank you so much for sharing your poetry with us Jan. Love, Carol
Hansen Avatar
April 19, 2012 at 4:44 PM
thank you darling carol, your new picture looks stunding
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