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Dented Cans

Lowly, faded, dented cans discarded and unseen where you have been and gone what journeys in your dreams? You’ve sat upon the shelves of dingy discount stores imperfect cans that feed the hungry, downcast poor. Then whisked you into bins in piles that climbed so high to eagerly be found and recycled for some dimes. There is a place for dented cans a humble way they give some see them as a heap of trash for others, essential to live. Written on 1/3/2018

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Date: 1/7/2018 7:08:00 PM
VERY well thought out. I think one of the best I have read in this category!! It better place!
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/7/2018 7:53:00 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I’m so happy you liked this one :)
Date: 1/3/2018 2:04:00 PM
Fantastic Laura! Wonderful penning, my best to you in the contest! xomo :)
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/3/2018 2:46:00 PM
Thank you, Maureen :)
Date: 1/3/2018 12:27:00 PM
Oh I think this moving piece will be a top winner Laura! It is a metaphor and tribute for those with little means. Brilliant! : )
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Laura Leiser
Date: 1/3/2018 12:41:00 PM
Thanks, Connie! I appreciate your kind comments :)

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