Dented Cans

Lowly, faded, dented cans
discarded and unseen
where you have been and gone
what journeys in your dreams?

You’ve sat upon the shelves
of dingy discount stores
imperfect cans that feed
the hungry, downcast poor.

Then whisked you into bins
in piles that climbed so high
to eagerly be found 
and recycled for some dimes.

There is a place for dented cans
a humble way they give
some see them as a heap of trash
for others, essential to live. 



Written on 1/3/2018
Copyright © | Year Posted 2018

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Dietrich Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:08 PM
VERY well thought out. I think one of the best I have read in this category!! It better place!
Leiser Avatar
January 7, 2018 at 7:53 PM
Thank you, Andrea! I’m so happy you liked this one :)
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January 3, 2018 at 2:04 PM
Fantastic Laura! Wonderful penning, my best to you in the contest! xomo :)
Leiser Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 2:46 PM
Thank you, Maureen :)
Marcum Wong Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:27 PM
Oh I think this moving piece will be a top winner Laura! It is a metaphor and tribute for those with little means. Brilliant! : )
Leiser Avatar
January 3, 2018 at 12:41 PM
Thanks, Connie! I appreciate your kind comments :)
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