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Denial Spiral

hand to word and hand to hand like a combat man to man word to word we spin and spin and spin with the words within my power your power spin spin spin exhausted we stop something in the way bias we say embrace and sigh to begin anew seeing eye to eye pledged not to deny we finally do begin again and again Free Verse 18 Lines 64 Words

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Susan Ashley

Date: 8/19/2022 5:29:00 PM

Dear Greg, your wonderfully poetic, golden pen is ingenious! I adore the timely spirit of this poem, the wordplay and the use of repetition, especially with the word "spin". Such a great title too to crown this amazing piece. Your artistic intellect shines ever so brightly! Warmest wishes, my friend.. ~Susan

Greg Gaul
Date: 8/20/2022 5:33:00 AM

Such a terrific visit Susan. Read lots of your stuff recently and continue to admire. However, we are different. So, it makes me feel valid when you comment so kindly. Ain't it great when poets comment that way? Warmest wishes right back at ya. Keep that quill quiveering.