Demure

demure and graceful she sat a wallflower clueless of her charm AP Honorable Mention 2021 Posted on July 12, 2018

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Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/13/2018 4:58:00 AM

This is a reality for so many shy girls. You describe it perfectly Line. Bravo! : )

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/13/2018 8:42:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Connie.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/13/2018 3:42:00 AM

I instantly see a beautiful girl who has been told she is less than beautiful, looking down, shy, not expecting to be asked.

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/13/2018 8:43:00 AM

So rough growing up. Thanks for your visit and comment, Caren.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 7/12/2018 11:56:00 PM

demure is so vastly underrated … I so like this one, Line. … I've pictured a librarian with glasses on and hair pulled back ... and knock-out figure underneath loose, ill-fitting, unstylish clothing :) gw

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/13/2018 8:44:00 AM

Thanks for your lovely visit and comment, Gershon. Line xx

Eve Roper

Date: 7/12/2018 8:55:00 PM

Lovely Senryu <3

Line Gauthier
Date: 7/12/2018 9:40:00 PM

Thank you, Eve. Most appreciated.