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Demons Within

In darkness gazing at the light homing in on who I really am, deep in the shadow a reflection of the lonely man I have become; in the void again discovering images not worth remembering, under its veil emerging demons over whose power I had not won; finding no peace vainly pretending that all is well with this life I'm in, laughing it seems yet really crying, pain surely coursing inside the brain.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 10/24/2008 11:44:00 PM
you seem to have some of the same veiws I have when writing.Unfortunately for me what I write is how I really feel at that time. good read hun.I enjoyed.. Christina AKA lilgypsygurl
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Date: 10/21/2008 7:37:00 AM
I am familiar with that void. Sadly, I think we all pretend just a little bit. Smiling on the outside, crying inside. A very honest write Wilfredo. I know you are fine and this is just imagination, but you made me believe it was true with your amazing writing abilities. Demons Within, doesn't everyone have one really? I know what you're thinking, that mine is goat cheese. : ) Love, Shar
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