Demon

Dark creature 
Evil and 
Malevolent, feeds on the souls
Of man before disappearing into the
Nights shadows.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Keen Avatar
July 13, 2010 at 10:21 AM
This is very cool and true! I love your style really, thanks for the kind comments
Keogh Jr. Avatar
July 5, 2010 at 6:19 PM
I like this, in that it borders on narration written to be spoken. Almost like old time radio. Thank you for your kindness! I remain, Gerard.
Tideswell Avatar
June 29, 2010 at 1:51 PM
ooh, a very dark acrostic. Well done ~ Sharon :)
Nandy Avatar
June 28, 2010 at 3:29 PM
direct and newborn fear is it? thank you for your comment on "talent's talent" , i fail to understand how did it get to be featured? someone did it? or the website does it automatically? plz explain!
Dietrich Avatar
June 9, 2010 at 11:12 PM
WEll done acrostic, JAnette! Luv, Andrea
Gumbo Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 3:58 PM
nicely done! Acrostic of DEMON
Guzzi Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 2:38 PM
yup...could be...shiver...Light & Love
Devonshire Avatar
May 19, 2010 at 12:48 PM
Spooky, Janette! I'll probably be dreaming of this demon tonight. Quite a character portrait. Love, Carolyn
Cwiak Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 9:45 PM
Someone was watching the Patrick Swayze - Demi Moore flick that I cannot for the life of me recall the title. Yeah, they scared me too! Good one! Dan C
Austin Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 3:43 PM
SPOOKEEEEEEE! You been a watchin' these here vampire movies? Good write. Love, daver
Culverhouse Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 12:13 PM
creepy is right, have you seen a demon? I know people who have seen one.
Fraser Avatar
May 17, 2010 at 4:34 AM
Creepy Acrostic Janette >> James
Mehta Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 6:34 PM
A nice pen picture of the Demon
A   Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 6:31 PM
wow, creepy lol, i like this one, the third line was my fave
Henderson Avatar
May 14, 2010 at 1:38 PM
Very visual janette, please see soup mail. cgh
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