Demon

Dark creature Evil and Malevolent, feeds on the souls Of man before disappearing into the Nights shadows.

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Richard-Jamaal Keen

Date: 7/13/2010 10:21:00 AM

This is very cool and true! I love your style really, thanks for the kind comments

Gerard Keogh Jr.

Date: 7/5/2010 6:19:00 PM

I like this, in that it borders on narration written to be spoken. Almost like old time radio. Thank you for your kindness! I remain, Gerard.

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 6/29/2010 1:51:00 PM

ooh, a very dark acrostic. Well done ~ Sharon :)

Rinki Nandy

Date: 6/28/2010 3:29:00 PM

direct and newborn fear is it? thank you for your comment on "talent's talent" , i fail to understand how did it get to be featured? someone did it? or the website does it automatically? plz explain!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/9/2010 11:12:00 PM

WEll done acrostic, JAnette! Luv, Andrea

Izzy Gumbo

Date: 5/19/2010 3:58:00 PM

nicely done! Acrostic of DEMON

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 5/19/2010 2:38:00 PM

yup...could be...shiver...Light & Love

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 5/19/2010 12:48:00 PM

Spooky, Janette! I'll probably be dreaming of this demon tonight. Quite a character portrait. Love, Carolyn

Daniel Cwiak

Date: 5/18/2010 9:45:00 PM

Someone was watching the Patrick Swayze - Demi Moore flick that I cannot for the life of me recall the title. Yeah, they scared me too! Good one! Dan C

Daver Austin

Date: 5/18/2010 3:43:00 PM

SPOOKEEEEEEE! You been a watchin' these here vampire movies? Good write. Love, daver