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They dwell In regions dark beneath the surface of the Earth. Where nowt of Adam walk or venture breath for fear Of Satan and his ghastly peers. The same who with delight had raised a million cheers When Eve our source had sorely sought her pleasure From that fatal tree And on her ears fell stern cries of God Be gone with ye. They watch Earths Faltering pallbearers of mediocrity and wait to strike.

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Date: 2/18/2016 12:36:00 PM
NICE TO SEE THIS ONE AGAIN
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Date: 12/6/2015 12:44:00 PM
:) SKAT
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Date: 2/18/2014 8:02:00 PM
Gus, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you enjoy the community, as I did when I first join the soup March 2010. You will find many friendly poets, who ready to take you under the their wings, and support and offer any kind of feedback. I will be around to help you grow with the community, if you like. I look forward to meeting and reading any poems or smiles you offer. :) :) :) We are one big happy family. (Drama & Love) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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Date: 2/7/2014 9:13:00 AM
Stunning poem! Dark and haunting. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Welcome to the soup
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Date: 2/6/2014 3:42:00 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Gus- I choose your first good and well written poem - hope you will write many poem in the future- Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Gus Keating
Date: 2/6/2014 3:43:00 PM
Thanks Ann Lise for your warm welcome and kind words. I found PoetrySoup by accident. I dont really know how it works yet. Greetings from Dublin. I will read your poems soon. Gus
Date: 2/6/2014 3:16:00 AM
Gus, Your first poem on the soup is excellent for the readers!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT
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Gus Keating
Date: 2/6/2014 3:46:00 PM
Thanks Skat and greetings from Dublin. I dont really know how this works yet but I will learn. I will read your poems as soon as I can. Thanks again for your kind words. Gus

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