Delusions of Grandeur- Bon Voyage

I rule the World just for a minute, And all I see is MINE! A sigh of Time that feels infinite- Some stroll beyond the "borderline" This Galaxy, it belongs to ME! Like Alice through the "Looking Glass" How sweet this mental Odyssey! Too bad it never, ever lasts...

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Jay Loveless

Date: 10/8/2013 4:06:00 PM

I enjoyed :) I too sometimes have Delusions of Grandeur ;)

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 12/6/2013 8:15:00 AM

Thanks, Jay :)

Joseph Matose

Date: 10/4/2013 12:23:00 PM

Archaic punch again! I enjoyed this write. Thanks my friend. You also look awesome! Hah-ha-ha!..JM

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/4/2013 3:55:00 PM

lol Thanks again, Joseph ;)

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 10/4/2013 6:38:00 AM

Yor pseudonym caught my atention 4 i luv archaic poetry. Hey its fine n awesome to hav such rhyming poetic delusions of grandeur. Pls review my latest poem .too

Just That Archaic Poet
Date: 10/4/2013 11:37:00 AM

Thanks, SZ (if I may call you that in short). I will check out your poems soon. Thanks again :)