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Delusional Dreams - Collaboration With White Wolf

DELUSIONAL DREAMS


As dark clouds fill my mind, 
Their shadows cast over my heart, 
Like a clock, you cannot wind, 
Still ticking, but will not start. 

Paralyzed delusional dreams;
The truth in me sleeps silently.
In hibernation so it seems,
To be awoken by your memory

Past sceneries haunt my weary eyes, 
Your fragrance lingers in the heavy air, 
Echoes of your voice that cries, 
Memories of the smiles you'd wear, 

Voices of you and I, so much pain,
Relentless mention I was so wrong
I still see you in my forlorn brain
I am so weak, you were too strong.

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Collaboration with White Wolf
January 5, 2017

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Nette Onclaud January 5, 2017 at 4:03 PM so thought-provoking .. what a great team-up, darren and rick..huggs Darren White January 6, 2017 at 12:58 AM Yes, we made a good team, and I love the result :)

Tim Smith January 5, 2017 at 10:54 AM Excellent collaboration guys...I really enjoyed this. Darren White January 5, 2017 at 11:01 AM We did too, it was a good collaboration :)

Freddie Robinson Jr. January 5, 2017 at 10:03 AM Read this beautiful collab under Rick's page, Darren. It is a beautiful, yet intensely painful poem. Separation can be like this in a love relationship. Great write by you two. May love light the path to peace always. Darren White January 5, 2017 at 10:08 AM It wasn't the easiest poem to write. It is beautiful I think.

Chris Green January 5, 2017 at 6:37 AM Another great collaboration Darren and with another of my favorite poets. Bravo to you and Rick, this was wonderful. Darren White January 5, 2017 at 7:10 AM Thanks Chris, I am very happy with the result, we worked well together :)

Claudia Polydoro January 5, 2017 at 5:57 AM Amazing collaboration from you guys! I love how the words flow... :) Darren White January 5, 2017 at 7:08 AM Thank you, this was so very good to do :)

White Wolf January 5, 2017 at 2:14 AM Yeah, I like yours better! Haha, Plus you have a cool pic Darren White January 6, 2017 at 1:31 AM I had to blink, and blink again, and thought: "this guy I so like to collaborate with has disappeared", but I am a huge fan of wolves, so welcome! White Wolf January 5, 2017 at 10:23 PM It's just my twisted sense of humour, Haha /|\ Darren White January 5, 2017 at 2:17 AM LOL, how can it be better, it's the same :D