Delusion - Sedoka Rhymed

Blindfold sight of life
whirl hues delusion that branch
out, with waves of pouring fears     
Voices, colors strife
a deluded avalanche,
there’s no one that sees or hears 

1/8/2016


Poetry Contest:  Something Different-SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed)  
 Sponsored by: Laura Loo

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Poet Destroyer A

January 28, 2016 at 9:10 PM

Eve, Congrats on your interesting win. Love LINDA -

Andrea Dietrich

January 19, 2016 at 3:59 PM

a deep one here!! Congrats on a fine win, Eve.

Skat A

January 18, 2016 at 10:37 AM

EVE, Congrats on your "SEDOKA FORM (Rhymed) winning poem." love SKAT**

Beautiful Scars

January 18, 2016 at 10:12 AM

Eve, I really love this poem, as I always love your poems :) Thank you for being a part if my contest *smiles* -luloo

Scott Thirtyseven

January 11, 2016 at 7:18 AM

and you made it rhyme. Kudos to you. Best of luck in the contest.

Etienne Lariviere

January 10, 2016 at 12:03 AM

Very nice poem xoxo

Dalia Shahein

January 9, 2016 at 8:20 PM

Very creative and beautiful , best of luck in the contest with this lovely write , hugs / / :) dalia

Arthur Vaso

January 9, 2016 at 8:11 PM

Eve this is so creative, this is art and poetry in one! Loved this!

Eric Boddie

January 9, 2016 at 11:59 AM

it seems to fit like a hand in glove....with misguided pushes that shove....sometimes it leads others to think they are above....but there is only one thing you can be sure of....eric wont be delusional for anything but True Love....wonderful write eve....;)