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Delta Adventure

Done! - with the salted Escape! .. to the dilute? Like a lust temporal, tames to river-quiet Agreeable is a delta ~ Autochthonous rage of the sea, dies in a landmass meandered Venturing uphill's a slower viv... Egos marine learning to abide No superciliousness in sunken trees and/ predictable current United wills, to leave a bayou, reach toward a snowy-topper Echoing heights of water pure (1/22/2021: Inspired by 'Watered-Down Juice' Contest and '98 Carver 350 Mariner, Bethel, Dec 2020)

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Date: 1/23/2021 8:07:00 PM
Your metaphors are so unique and layered, especially like 'Egos marine learning to abide' - good luck in the contest!
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/23/2021 9:07:00 PM
thank you...oh this one doesn't quite meet the contest requirements so it's not entered :)
Date: 1/22/2021 8:04:00 PM
Clever and embracing poetry, Susan. Love it..
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/23/2021 5:53:00 AM
Thank you Harry, glad you enjoyed it :)
Date: 1/22/2021 4:41:00 PM
You sure are one amazing poetess with words, my friend :)
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Susan Woodrow
Date: 1/23/2021 5:53:00 AM
thank you Akkina :) it's just a fun thing I like to do - find words I don't use much and deliberately insert them in a poem :))