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Delirium

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Oh, what sweet... d e l i r i u m! I'm left begging for more. One gulp of you is... not enough. Darling, you can't be... c o n s u m e d in one bite. Heaven knows I'm so d r u n k on you I don't know what to do with... myself anymore. (Yalto) "Yalto" is a form invented by yours truly Line 1-15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5 syllables Delirium Poetry Contest (Winner: 3rd Place) Sponsored by Kai Michael Neumann Date written: 07/16/2020

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 8/1/2020 11:55:00 PM

Edward I always admire the way you fuse your emotions in Yalto. This one again flows smoothly into the heart beautifully begging for more. Congratulations on your win my friend :)

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/2/2020 6:17:00 AM

Thank you very much indeed, Aditi:-) Your wonderful feedback has made my day, my friend!

Hilo Poet

Date: 7/31/2020 7:21:00 PM

Yalto master, Edward, came through placing high honors--Congrats my friend, Aloha! William

Edward Ibeh
Date: 8/1/2020 10:28:00 AM

Thank you very much, William:-)

Anisha Dutta

Date: 7/31/2020 11:21:00 AM

Wow! Lovely. Congrats to win

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2020 2:15:00 PM

Thank you so much, Anisha:-)

Kai Michael Neumann

Date: 7/31/2020 9:36:00 AM

Congratulations. Simple. Beautiful. Simply beautiful ...

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/31/2020 10:17:00 AM

Oh wow! Many thanks for my podium placement, Kai:-) Pleasantly surprised and honored!

Krish Radhakrishna

Date: 7/22/2020 12:18:00 AM

This is one impressive Yalto. Feelings are deep and the ending is wonderful! Well done. A sure winner!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/22/2020 6:51:00 AM

Thank you so much, Krish:-)

John Hamilton

Date: 7/17/2020 10:31:00 AM

This is great Edward how do you keep them coming every day? Glad you're still here some of the best, have gone, your writing keeps me interested enough to stick around!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/17/2020 12:31:00 PM

Thank you for always supporting my poems, John:-) Blessings to you!

Vijay Pandit

Date: 7/17/2020 7:14:00 AM

Awesome write. This is a must win!

Edward Ibeh
Date: 7/17/2020 12:29:00 PM

Thank you! I appreciate the vote of confidence, Vijay:-)