Delirium

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Yalto
Invented by Edward Ibeh: line 1 to 15: 3,4,2,4,5,3,2,3,2,3,3,5,6,1,5, no rhyme required.

There’s a slight fever followed by cold sweats and the shakes as magic mushrooms claim control of you. Your conscious mind then slowly slips out of sync with reality and delirium starts... your roller- coaster ride! (Yalto) 05/22/2020

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Sam Kauffman

Date: 6/8/2020 2:06:00 PM

"Roller coaster ride" is a perfect description of delirium, Emile. Congratulations on your winning placement.

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/9/2020 8:28:00 AM

Thanks Sam, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Aditi Mishra

Date: 6/8/2020 7:28:00 AM

I can feel the delirium creeping slowly into the mind with your words. This is brilliant. Congratulations on your win Emile :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/8/2020 9:22:00 AM

Thanks Aditi, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 6/7/2020 2:57:00 PM

Your mind went right to the mushrooms. I HEAR They are quite the ride. I think I would be afraid to try it. Well done, Emile. Congrats.

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/7/2020 3:23:00 PM

Thanks Andrea, yes back in the day I went on a few trips, but memories are better remembered than repeated, especially today my friend, stay safe, Emile.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 6/7/2020 1:56:00 PM

- Congratulations on your well deserved 2nd place in the Yalto contest, Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/7/2020 3:19:00 PM

Thanks Anne-Lise, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 6/7/2020 6:44:00 AM

Fascinating, beautiful-looking Yalto, Emile:-) Congratulations on your podium finish!

Emile Pinet
Date: 6/7/2020 8:48:00 AM

Thanks Edward, I can't seem to write enough of these poems, I love your form my friend, Emile.