Get Your Premium Membership

Delightful the Gait

The girl in me pirouettes without care, allowing hips' gait on the blue of rocks as lush wings reel and orbit from nowhere... O my toes click, a magic that unlocks a host of robins slip-sliding away in a meadow which airbrushes the night; when birdsong echoes low, " be young...good day!" Till finally, my jives end with delight. 9/4/2019 Line Gauthier's Swagger Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2019




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 12/7/2019 9:33:00 AM
A free-spirited poem of joy unrestrained, Nette! Cool ink spray ... Pink Flamingo tango ballet. Love and best wishes for the holidays.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2019 10:13:00 PM
What wonderful imagery in this well-crafted write, nette. Congrats on your win in Line's contest. Best wishes, Gershon
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2019 12:00:00 PM
Nette, what a jivey, happy poem, had to fav. it - you are as free as a bird in this poem! Great write, congratulations der Nette. blessings and hugs, Jenn.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2019 8:21:00 AM
Hi Nette, I enjoyed your take on the contest theme. The girl in this seems so free. Congratulations your placement in the contest. Have a great weekend my friend:-) Alexis
Login to Reply
Date: 9/7/2019 7:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your podium win with your sweet dancing poem.
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2019 7:04:00 PM
Nicely done, Nette! I like on the blue of rocks!
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2019 6:54:00 PM
totally free dear poet,
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2019 5:01:00 PM
My best for this delightful creation. It's soo beautiful Love, Panagiota
Login to Reply
Date: 9/4/2019 4:11:00 PM
Really nice take on the contest theme Nette. I enjoyed this
Login to Reply

Book: Reflection on the Important Things