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Warm and vibrant mirth amidst sweet embrace… encloses our love-filled bonding moment my special child’s earnest laughter-bursts reign enjoying lollipop fast licking race savouring delight of sheer contentment--- great gain*. “Thank you, Mom” asserts his sign language glow grateful response, hiding spasm strain such grips our exuberant engagement making me praise the Lord for blessings’ flow not vain.
*1Timothy 6:6 But godliness with contentment is great gain. November 4, 2020 1st place, "The Speaker" Curtal Sonnet Poetry Contest Sponsored by Sara Kendrick; judged on 11/21/2020.

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Date: 11/21/2020 10:01:00 AM
Congrats, Beata, on this winning Curtal Sonnet, Aloha!
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Date: 11/21/2020 2:10:00 AM
Thanks for participating in my contest. I appreciate you taking the time and writing this nice event from your life. Sara
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Date: 11/4/2020 6:32:00 AM
Delightful indeed, Beata! The beauty of love shines in your poetic lines. Exquisitely expressed. Best wishes for a win.. ~Susan
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