Delicate As the Twilight

~

The day is folding

     like moths as they close their wings

          skies fade to crimson

               with butterfly reflections...

                    and fireflies gather night
               
                                                                    ~
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011


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Date: 6/24/2011 7:28:00 PM
A lovely peaceful rendition of the closing day.
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Date: 6/15/2011 1:25:00 AM
Your poetry is always so beautiful,as if you paint words frm a rainbow's palette,so happy to read you again,dear friend!
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Date: 6/12/2011 6:37:00 PM
Amazing poetry here Carrie...Congrats on your win.
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Date: 6/12/2011 1:26:00 PM
Hey there Carrie, congratulations on your win in Pd's contest ;)
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Date: 6/12/2011 12:29:00 PM
Very expressive and descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..Sara
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Date: 6/12/2011 12:09:00 PM
CARRIE~~Congratulations 4 this wonderful entry!!!! Thank you once again, I'm always honored to have you support any of my contest. Don't miss out on my next one.. Take care,..p.d
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Date: 6/12/2011 11:45:00 AM
perfect title for this very beautiful tanka, Carrie :) really enjoy reading your very visual gems :) congrats and hugs
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Date: 6/12/2011 9:23:00 AM
My congratulations on the win in the contest of p.d., carrie
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Date: 6/12/2011 8:16:00 AM
Congrats Carrie on your super win in PD's contest of last post.. great as all your posts my friend.. enjoy another top ten success luv..
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Date: 6/12/2011 2:49:00 AM
oh, yes.. the wonder of afterglow, carrie.. perky cheers for the amazing award!! :) huggs
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Date: 6/11/2011 8:08:00 PM
oh,my, this is really beautiful. It shows several aspects of twilight all at once. Love it!
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Date: 6/11/2011 1:37:00 PM
beautiful visual created by nice images, Carrie
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Date: 6/11/2011 10:06:00 AM
Absolute fantastic Poetry... Never a missed word in your art.... Love it..Luv Michael
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Date: 6/11/2011 9:37:00 AM
Beautiful..love the last line especially..BG
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