Deliberately

Deliberately she goes to the rasberries
Quietly, softly moves the foot of the lady
The one who enjoys morn to explore outdoors
Seeing what if anything changed overnight

Elegant even adorned in loose gown
With silver flip-flops on those plump feet
Oh! yes some rasberries are ready to be picked
Grasp, rinse, eat just the food needed for now
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Culverhouse Avatar
June 23, 2010 at 7:47 AM
really? can I have some? I saw blueberries out there two. Is Phyllis coming today?
Clark Avatar
June 22, 2010 at 4:27 AM
Beautiful Sara, One day at a time! Thank you for your kind and supportive words on my poem. There is something to be said for simple romantic writings. A timeframe when life was taught much by nature and earthly conclusions. I love the period. I always enjoy your work! Love Jeralynn
Beer Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 4:21 PM
Very inviting, Sara. A raspberry would taste pretty good right now. My granddaughter would love this poem because she lives in flip flops. Good job, keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile Thanks for your encouraging words on my poem.
Pattison Avatar
June 21, 2010 at 3:08 PM
Nice choice of words, really enjoyed the second stanza. Thanks for your comment on my new poem. Regards, Gavin.
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