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Deliberately

Deliberately she goes to the rasberries Quietly, softly moves the foot of the lady The one who enjoys morn to explore outdoors Seeing what if anything changed overnight Elegant even adorned in loose gown With silver flip-flops on those plump feet Oh! yes some rasberries are ready to be picked Grasp, rinse, eat just the food needed for now

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 6/23/2010 7:47:00 AM
really? can I have some? I saw blueberries out there two. Is Phyllis coming today?
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Date: 6/22/2010 4:27:00 AM
Beautiful Sara, One day at a time! Thank you for your kind and supportive words on my poem. There is something to be said for simple romantic writings. A timeframe when life was taught much by nature and earthly conclusions. I love the period. I always enjoy your work! Love Jeralynn
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Date: 6/21/2010 4:21:00 PM
Very inviting, Sara. A raspberry would taste pretty good right now. My granddaughter would love this poem because she lives in flip flops. Good job, keep up the good work, God Bless, Cile Thanks for your encouraging words on my poem.
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Date: 6/21/2010 3:08:00 PM
Nice choice of words, really enjoyed the second stanza. Thanks for your comment on my new poem. Regards, Gavin.
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