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I often accuse my computer Of being a sanity looter. If someone has seen Bullet holes on the screen I'd admit it, 'cause I'd be the shooter!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 11/16/2011 11:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the Techno-Limerick contest Ilene. Love, Carol

Black Eyed Susan

Date: 11/15/2011 8:51:00 AM

can totally relate (seems my poem is very similar) - love the anger in yours. congrats on your win!

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/11/2011 1:04:00 AM

ILENE~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, WITH YOUR entry FOR CAROLYN, TECHNO LIMERICK* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/10/2011 8:05:00 PM

This was one of the best! congrats.

John Freeman

Date: 11/10/2011 5:19:00 PM

Haaaaaaaa! I quite understand the humor in this Ilene, Cool job, lady. Congratulations Agape, Moses

Natalie The Rogue Rhymer

Date: 11/10/2011 10:20:00 AM

Easy Ilene-LOL! Too funny-I can't believe I missed this one-just love it :) Congrats. on your win :)

Carrie Richards

Date: 11/10/2011 8:40:00 AM

Ditto here!! Nothing I've ever owned, has been more frustrating, or enjoyable!!:) Congratulations on your delightful poem!

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/10/2011 8:25:00 AM

Ilene, if I had a gun in my house, there would be times I'd want to shoot my computer too. Love the way you refer to it as a "sanity looter." Very creative and witty. The competition was stiff, so all who placed had to be in the top tier of both Alexa's and my rankings. Love, Carolyn

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/1/2011 7:42:00 PM

LOVE it because that is how MINE makes ME feel.

Kim Merryman

Date: 11/1/2011 4:52:00 PM

I know how you feel, Ilene! Great limerick. Kim