Degenerated Fourth Lumbar Disc

Pain 
Constant throbbing
Never ending
Day and night
Stop
Night and day
Ending never
Throbbing constant
Pain
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Sweetheart Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 1:19 PM
Congrats Sara on your HM in the Palindrome contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy your special honor my friend.. with luv..
Brown Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 7:03 AM
Congratulations Sara on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Palindrone". Love,Carol
Bagnall Avatar
July 21, 2010 at 4:23 AM
It's nice to see a poem to which most people can relate quite easily - well done
Freeman Avatar
July 20, 2010 at 10:59 PM
Congratulation, Sara on your hm, Agape, Moses
Culverhouse Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 3:55 PM
enjoyed--not the pain though--hope you feel better!
Tideswell Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 6:12 AM
A perfect form for this seemingly endless pain. Great write, hope the pain goes away soon ~ Sharon :)
R Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 1:58 AM
I never tried this form before...it's very interesting...yes, sometimes pain seems endless...been there. Emily
Dietrich Avatar
July 4, 2010 at 12:28 AM
Ouch!! I can SO relate to this one and I hope you have some good news about your health soon. Luv, Andrea
K. Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 5:08 PM
Ouch indeed!! My mom has back pains as well, her spinal discs are rubbing on each other already--this is such a great palindrome, Sara-- btw just a typo in your title--I believe that should be "lumbar"--hope this helps :) --nikko ::)
Devonshire Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 2:24 PM
Ouch! So sorry you are having this problem, Sara. I cannot seem to write a palindrome, but you've come up with a terrific one! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn
Sweetheart Avatar
July 3, 2010 at 1:40 PM
A great Palindrome for Jared's contst Sara... good luck.. hope its not true.. enjoyed the great use of descriptive words... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..
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