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Degenerated Fourth Lumbar Disc

Pain Constant throbbing Never ending Day and night Stop Night and day Ending never Throbbing constant Pain

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/21/2010 1:19:00 PM

Congrats Sara on your HM in the Palindrome contest with this wonderful write.. enjoy your special honor my friend.. with luv..

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 7/21/2010 7:03:00 AM

Congratulations Sara on your win in Jared Pickett's contest "The Palindrone". Love,Carol

Nick Bagnall

Date: 7/21/2010 4:23:00 AM

It's nice to see a poem to which most people can relate quite easily - well done

John Freeman

Date: 7/20/2010 10:59:00 PM

Congratulation, Sara on your hm, Agape, Moses

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 7/4/2010 3:55:00 PM

enjoyed--not the pain though--hope you feel better!

Sharon Tideswell

Date: 7/4/2010 6:12:00 AM

A perfect form for this seemingly endless pain. Great write, hope the pain goes away soon ~ Sharon :)

De R

Date: 7/4/2010 1:58:00 AM

I never tried this form before...it's very interesting...yes, sometimes pain seems endless...been there. Emily

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/4/2010 12:28:00 AM

Ouch!! I can SO relate to this one and I hope you have some good news about your health soon. Luv, Andrea

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 7/3/2010 5:08:00 PM

Ouch indeed!! My mom has back pains as well, her spinal discs are rubbing on each other already--this is such a great palindrome, Sara-- btw just a typo in your title--I believe that should be "lumbar"--hope this helps :) --nikko ::)

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 7/3/2010 2:24:00 PM

Ouch! So sorry you are having this problem, Sara. I cannot seem to write a palindrome, but you've come up with a terrific one! Best wishes in the contest. Love, Carolyn

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 7/3/2010 1:40:00 PM

A great Palindrome for Jared's contst Sara... good luck.. hope its not true.. enjoyed the great use of descriptive words... with luv from the "Sweetheart" in Hawaii..