Defying Gravity

Away behind clouds defying,even fighting gravity
heaven in juxtaposition
kites leaping merrily
now on pivotal quickening,reaching skyward
tailspinning upon very wide x's
yonder zooming.


I'd like to dedicate this to Andrea Dietrich for her always encouraging words
and comments on my poetry that are uplifting...I appreciate it  so much...
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November 22, 2012 at 4:59 PM
Deb, enjoyed stopping by once again ;-)~ Hope you are having a joyous holiday. Take care ~PD
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April 16, 2012 at 10:05 PM
A wonderful journey with your Kite and congratulations on your winning plac Deb xx
Brown Avatar
April 16, 2012 at 1:06 PM
Congratulations on your win in Gwen's "Lets Go Fly A Kite" contest Deb. Love, Carol
Song Avatar
April 15, 2012 at 7:13 PM
You pulled off an ABC poem in grand style, Deb..No one else even attempted one. ..heaven in juxtoposition, kites leaping merrily,,,so strong for this topic...congrats on this wonderfully written entry! Love, Gwendolen
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April 1, 2012 at 8:45 PM
A very clever ABC poem, Deb! I love the poem and lovely dedication. Blessings, Rhonda
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April 1, 2012 at 8:09 AM
A beautiful write and dedication to one soups finest Poets....Lovely words!!! Great Title also.... luv n hugs Michael
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