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Deflective Deceptions Due

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The wolves awake; beware the great deception. The vampires' conjugate conception. Witches gather with their brew, Tyrants in their coup. Surrender- Due! Pretender… Cunning treasons thru, Edict illusions will spew. Ignominious of inception, The wolves awake; beware the great deception. July.12.2020 Andaree Sponsored by~Joseph May Placed 1'st...Thank You

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Aditi Mishra

Date: 7/27/2020 3:05:00 AM

I love how elegantly you narrate the deceptive illusions WW. I could swim through it to reach the end or awaken myself to realize it. Congratulations on your win. Blessings and hugs :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/19/2020 3:24:00 PM

It sounds like you are one of the "awakened ones" WW. Good for you. Wolves indeed! Congrats for your great placement.

Jenna Logan

Date: 7/19/2020 6:40:00 AM

The fair warning of ominous events is intriguing, WW. Your use of alliteration in this instance is note worthy. Congratulations.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/18/2020 7:54:00 PM

Beware of wolves in sheep's clothing. A fantastic entry for the contest WW. Congratulations on your first place win! Excellent! Blessings xxoo

Janice Canerdy

Date: 7/18/2020 4:07:00 PM

Powerful, descriptive WINNING poem, WW! Janice

Joseph May

Date: 7/18/2020 3:41:00 PM

The pretenders will not surrender, Well penned Wingster, Congrats on your win..

Jan Allison

Date: 7/18/2020 3:16:00 PM

Oh I've met a few folk like this on soup lol, many congratulations on your win:-) hugs Jan xx

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 7/17/2020 3:38:00 AM

I was getting ready to enter one of these; now I am hesitating; I have read so many terrific ones today. This one has intimidated me as much as any of the others.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 7/14/2020 3:22:00 PM

You are on a roll....baabam!

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 7/12/2020 9:13:00 PM

Wow, I love this, WW, and I'm intrigued! I need to check out this contest. Best wishes...much love and blessings, Rhonda xx

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/13/2020 4:36:00 AM

Thanks so much, Rhonda...its a fun form but challenging at the same time...have fun...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Sand Blown

Date: 7/12/2020 2:53:00 PM

....love the title....'andt now, behind door number 3....zee wolves........stan sand

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/13/2020 4:40:00 AM

At least you didn't pick door #2...that's where the pigs in the mud are lol...thanks bud...best wishes...^WW^ :o)

Constance La France

Date: 7/12/2020 12:43:00 PM

WW, excellent writing as usual, best of luck in the contest _Constance

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/13/2020 4:44:00 AM

Thanks, Constance La France...your name is rather cool...you sound like a countess...our countess of PoetrySoup...love & hugs...^WW^ :o)

Panagiota Romios

Date: 7/12/2020 12:18:00 PM

Your imagination astounds me PR

Winged Warrior
Date: 7/13/2020 4:47:00 AM

I'm out there Pangie...I'm out there...wherever that is lol...thanks dear poetic sister...love & hugs...Wayway out Wingster lol :o)