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Defining the Indefinables

Defining the Indefinables Garnered in my thoughts is an unknown mentor, The Lyric The first to welcome and walk me into the world of soupers He himself is there and yet not there for his presence is felt by few The thought of him brings three dancing penguins into my mind The Silent One kept me alerted and enthused with brevity His silence reflects his fortitude in raising his children single handedly His poems echo his loyalty to a bygone era of world that could have been Sandra Haight and Richard Lamoureux take me into an unbounded utopia Their warm encouragement even for a simple effort seems rewarding A mere look at their soft looks arouses an undulating feeling of protectiveness November 5, 2016 For Andrea Dietrich Community Builders Free for All Tribute

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Date: 11/27/2016 8:11:00 PM
Such a beautiful, supportive tribute to some PS poets, Balveen, and I feel so honored to be included among them! Thank you so much and congrats on your win! Hugs, Sandra
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/30/2016 5:12:00 AM
You deserve much more Sandra! Love, Balveen
Date: 11/27/2016 8:30:00 AM
Hi Balveen, I agree, the soupers that you paid tribute to are amazing. Congratulations on your win. It was well deserved: -) Alexis
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 9:10:00 AM
Hi Alexis! Thanks & love, Balveen
Date: 11/27/2016 12:03:00 AM
Great Write. Congrats Balveen
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 3:40:00 AM
Thanks Anisha!
Date: 11/26/2016 4:36:00 PM
Congratulations on your lovely tribute win Balveen! : )
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 3:41:00 AM
Many thanks Connie!
Date: 11/26/2016 2:15:00 PM
Many congrats on your win Balveen such lovely tributes:-) hugs Jan xx
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 3:41:00 AM
Thank-you so much Jan!
Date: 11/26/2016 1:05:00 PM
Balveen congratulations on your win in the contest.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 3:42:00 AM
Thanks Constance! Balveen
Date: 11/25/2016 6:53:00 PM
This was a very thoughtful tribute, Balveen and I think will be greatly appreciated by those poets you named. Thanks for your support.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/27/2016 3:45:00 AM
Hope they read it Andrea! It makes the heart feel better. Anyway, thanks Andrea for finding my work thoughtful and also for this lovely contest ! Balveen
Date: 11/7/2016 8:21:00 AM
Hi Balveen, I am touched. Hugs Rick, you have added a smile to my morning.
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Balveen Cheema
Date: 11/12/2016 8:50:00 AM
Richard I'm always touched with your arm looks! Take care! Regards, Balveen

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