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Defective Impulse Control

Like you feel the pinch throb then consider procedure Weighing the circumstances Calculating the outcomes But the plight beats driven the wrong way... You know not to but then continue and finish Then stop then restart and continue and not finish. Open endings are so... What the pageant loses sight of and the world claims to die of What we provoke isn't enough What we approach loses touch. As lit flames cease to ignite Our boiling point rises from the inside and pressured rage exits to the outside Which leaves us unable to administer regimentation and then...

Copyright © | Year Posted 2016




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Date: 3/17/2016 6:14:00 PM
This one I think I understand, and I like your voice here. Also appreciate your visit my way. PermaCulture Prayer has been popular but something about it bothers me. Wouldn't have thought of "robotic", but maybe that's part of what feels wrong about it.
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Date: 1/13/2016 3:17:00 PM
Interesting thoughts penned..Thanks for all the visits to my page..I appreciate the time spent there..Sara
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