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DEEPLY AWAY

Memory particles blow away like dust,

while heart emotions root deeply in us.

emotionsfeelingsmemoryrememberfree verse

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Beata Agustin

March 31, 2025 at 11:05 PM

Wow! Congratulations! Thanks for sharing this. God bless you.

thriveni c mysore

March 31, 2025 at 9:30 PM

Congratulations on your win dear poet. Cheers!!!

James Inman

October 29, 2016 at 8:07 AM

Captures the quote beautifully CayCay.

Alexis Y.

October 28, 2016 at 7:56 AM

Hi CayCay, In two lines you spoke volumes.Congratulations on your win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis

Balveen Cheema

October 27, 2016 at 5:27 AM

Congrats CayCay on your win! Brevity is the soul of wit!

Carole Duet

October 27, 2016 at 1:10 AM

So true, Cay Cay. Congratulations on your placement in the contest.

Connie Marcum Wong

October 27, 2016 at 12:02 AM

I love this CayCay. Congratulations on your placement! 7 +l:)

Jean Murray

October 25, 2016 at 4:58 PM

Wise words CayCay. Well done.

Seosamh De Burca

October 24, 2016 at 8:27 PM

Nicely penned response

Maurice Yvonne

October 24, 2016 at 7:31 AM

Love this brief but touching response. Excellent.

Andrea Dietrich

October 18, 2016 at 3:25 PM

wow, is that all we have to do is make a small response? I need to look that contest over again! You nailed it, Caycay. how are things going for you?

Darren White

October 17, 2016 at 11:41 PM

I love Maya Angelou, and I most certainly love your beautiful response to that quote.

John Hardison

October 17, 2016 at 11:27 PM

So true. Keenly put. Best of luck in contest. Peace, Love and Joy

Paloma P

October 17, 2016 at 4:26 AM

Succinctly effective CayCay, love Maya's quote and your response is precisely conveyed.

Viv Wigley

October 17, 2016 at 12:22 AM

Compact, concise and very, very true, CayCay. Lovely. Viv x

Nette Onclaud

October 16, 2016 at 7:10 PM

cay, the heart cannot be deceived...i feel you in this beautiful verse..huggs!

Charmaine Chircop

October 16, 2016 at 3:08 PM

Awesome Cay Cay..Awesome.

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 16, 2016 at 2:37 PM

Hello CayCay, nice meeting you.I agree withe everything you said in your poem. Maya Angelou was very knowledgeable She made sense with everything she said. I miss her.