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Deeping fields

Deep and down.' following slopes of yearning green flowing growth Rich as grass of pa ha sa pah towering opportunity; high as the peaks around Absorb abundance, see eternity's shadow accept strength, that embellishes weakness The soft water penetrates, cleaning air and trees all renewing in gentle perseverance Be at ease before creation, cup its richness in the map of your spirit.'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Date: 2/19/2016 3:22:00 PM
Hello Nathan, thanks for the visit, I must ask at this point, have you ever yourself lived wild.? Also there is allegory in this write as in who can tame the source of 'poetic inspiration?' Always good to hear from you look me up anytime.
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Date: 2/18/2016 9:38:00 PM
Allow me to intrude with with some cold hard reality. It's only easy to be at ease in the nature we have tamed. Go into the true wild where everything what's to kill you and eat you then tell me how at ease you are. Mother nature is a bitch
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Date: 1/23/2016 12:20:00 PM
Wisdom and arts hug as twins in between your lines. A wonderful 7
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Date: 1/7/2016 3:05:00 PM
Love this Joe, reminds me of the land after the mines close the regrowth of nature upon the scars left behind..
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Date: 12/26/2015 11:54:00 AM
Rather enchanting, Joe! All the very best for the New Year...And my warmest wishes! :) john
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Date: 12/13/2015 2:35:00 PM
Good for Christmas, Joe. "Be at ease before creation." I like that. Love, daver
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Joe Maverick
Date: 12/14/2015 12:17:00 PM
thanks Daver'
Date: 11/30/2015 5:52:00 PM
Sorry for the delay in thanking you reading my Flackmoth serial poems of which I now have enough for a small volume. I will be posting my newest one soon. See what you think. Best to you in your writing endeavors. / M
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Date: 11/26/2015 5:19:00 AM
You carry our beliefs on your sleeve, and into the last line. Thoughtful write.
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Date: 11/25/2015 3:58:00 PM
I especially like the last line..Thanks for stopping by..Sara
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Date: 11/18/2015 12:34:00 PM
Joe, seems to be a good way in viewing the deep fields. Enjoyed. SKAT
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Date: 11/17/2015 3:59:00 PM
Very deep. The title is most fitting, Joe!
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