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Deeper Within

i fell but no one heard ~ seared and sentenced to solitude a penance of mythical proportions peace didn't even try found in a lost barrel of steel where the last chambers spent their dying breath red, black, no going back pushing the postulates between life and man no lending hand run over or overrun drips and beats silenced storms strike night blinks suffering blanks amid blackouts angel in white I can see or am I blind to what this means this way was never kind ~ hushed the morning breaks

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 5/4/2018 11:55:00 AM
Had to read this twice and is a deep write Tim. Hope all is well with you. Glad your angel in white appeared. love phyl
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Date: 4/25/2018 9:35:00 PM
A deep write Tim.. hope you're doing good! Sending you hugs :)
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Date: 4/23/2018 12:37:00 PM
Hello Tim. This is a must read out loud entry with emphasis. The title and opening line alone set the tone for the reader and tells the reader he will be reading poetry.
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Date: 4/22/2018 10:45:00 PM
Deep write, Tim, deeper into your mind does strife.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 4/21/2018 6:28:00 PM
Gosh, this is deep Tim. The barrel of steel with chambers has to be a gun? No going back? I hope not.
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Date: 4/21/2018 3:18:00 PM
Well expressed Tim. Nice to see the angel in white :)
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