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Deeper

Stronger than the scent of you Past the glint, the colour of eyes even Warmer than your sweetest smile Inviting, reeling me in Deeper than your skin Your muscles, your heart pounding Your fingertips, the lightest touch Wanting and needing; far deeper than such Love’s fluidity flowing deep Deeper than moist desirous heat Softer than my whispered name Deeper than the mating game Beyond fertility, deeper than that … Deeper than even Eden’s lap

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David Williams

Date: 1/15/2014 8:40:00 AM

Patricia a warm welcome to our home...put your feet up stay a while and read, there are some fabulous poets here...your poem is very good, I like the way you mixed it up with feelings and senses, very clever...keep writing...David

Patricia L Graham
Date: 1/15/2014 8:52:00 AM

Thank you David, I'll drop by your page. Still figuring out how to do things on here!

Jiril Clemons

Date: 1/14/2014 6:09:00 PM

Great poem, Patricia. The description of that which is "deep" is beautifully expressed in this piece. Amazing choice of imagery, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace.

Patricia L Graham
Date: 1/15/2014 8:53:00 AM

Appreciate your comments Jiril and will drop by your pages.

Peter Dome

Date: 1/14/2014 5:33:00 PM

That is deep, A great write with real feeling. great lines. well done.take care Pete.

Peter Dome
Date: 1/14/2014 5:44:00 PM

Welcome to the soup Patricia. hope your happy here, sure you will be. The soup is the place, so jump right in.. I look forward to reading mote of your great poems soon. take care. best wishes. Pete.

Patricia L Graham
Date: 1/14/2014 5:33:00 PM

Why thank you kindly sir! I made a mental note to check out more of your stuff by the way. I'm a newbee (yes bee) on here so it'll take me a little while to come to terms with everything going on here. Seems like the best poetry place I've discovered so far!!!

Liam Mcdaid

Date: 1/14/2014 4:32:00 PM

very beautifully penned excellent piece

Patricia L Graham
Date: 1/14/2014 5:38:00 PM

Really appreciate your dropping by. I just loved that Haiku of yours and looking forward to delving into your work. Just need to acquaint myself with how things tick around here a touch. I feel inspired and I haven't written a thing lately!