Patricia L Graham Poet Free verse

Deeper

Stronger than the scent of you
Past the glint, the colour of eyes even

Warmer than your sweetest smile
Inviting, reeling me in

Deeper than your skin
Your muscles, your heart pounding

Your fingertips, the lightest touch
Wanting and needing; far deeper than such

Love’s fluidity flowing deep
Deeper than moist desirous heat

Softer than my whispered name
Deeper than the mating game

Beyond fertility, deeper than that …
Deeper than even Eden’s lap

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David Williams January 15, 2014 at 8:40 AM Patricia a warm welcome to our home...put your feet up stay a while and read, there are some fabulous poets here...your poem is very good, I like the way you mixed it up with feelings and senses, very clever...keep writing...David Patricia L Graham January 15, 2014 at 8:52 AM Thank you David, I'll drop by your page. Still figuring out how to do things on here!

Jiril Clemons January 14, 2014 at 6:09 PM Great poem, Patricia. The description of that which is "deep" is beautifully expressed in this piece. Amazing choice of imagery, enjoyable overall. Check out some of my poems, might find some you like. Peace. Patricia L Graham January 15, 2014 at 8:53 AM Appreciate your comments Jiril and will drop by your pages.

Peter Dome January 14, 2014 at 5:33 PM That is deep, A great write with real feeling. great lines. well done.take care Pete. Peter Dome January 14, 2014 at 5:44 PM Welcome to the soup Patricia. hope your happy here, sure you will be. The soup is the place, so jump right in.. I look forward to reading mote of your great poems soon. take care. best wishes. Pete. Patricia L Graham January 14, 2014 at 5:33 PM Why thank you kindly sir! I made a mental note to check out more of your stuff by the way. I'm a newbee (yes bee) on here so it'll take me a little while to come to terms with everything going on here. Seems like the best poetry place I've discovered so far!!!

Liam Mcdaid January 14, 2014 at 4:32 PM very beautifully penned excellent piece Patricia L Graham January 14, 2014 at 5:38 PM Really appreciate your dropping by. I just loved that Haiku of yours and looking forward to delving into your work. Just need to acquaint myself with how things tick around here a touch. I feel inspired and I haven't written a thing lately!