Deep-Dark-Hollowed Heart

I stand 
I wait
I worried
for the things that may not happened

I hope
I pray
I cried
longing for a peaceful heart

All I wanted is...
when i close my eyes I won't feel afraid
and when I open my eyes, a smile will appear 
coz today i breathe again

in a deep-dark-hollowed heart
like living as a sinner
like walking around in a forest finding a way out
God, released me from this feeling...

Nobody wants to feel alone
like a stranger in a crowded place
take me to a home where love can hold me
to a nice sleep when the night comes

I am lost so find me
I cry so hug me
I am lonely so love me...
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Agustin Avatar
October 12, 2024 at 12:57 AM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Meanwhile, I greet you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
A   Avatar
February 18, 2016 at 11:58 AM
Mony, Enjoyed the way you expressed every line. Please keep writing and sharing your poetry. LOVE LINDA
A  Avatar
December 5, 2015 at 10:13 PM
Mony, I really enjoyed this poem thanks for sharing. Luv ~SKAT~
Dorr Avatar
July 14, 2013 at 8:30 AM
Moving! No amount of wealth, influence or power can compensate for love. All the best, Peter 14/7/13
Andresen Avatar
January 11, 2012 at 11:43 AM
"All you need is love,love....." - Touching poem Mony. - oxox Big hug from Anne-Lise
Reyna Avatar
September 25, 2012 at 7:33 AM
right... everything needs love. thanx for your comment
Kendrick Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:06 AM
I believe that this is even deeper sadness than the poem even indicates..I am glad that I chose this one to read this morn...Many homes are not a safe place for the children or the wife..I hope that this is not your life..Sara
Reyna Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:49 AM
well, i write this not because of any fear of someone but fear for not achieving.. i won't say i fear for life but there are problems in my life i need to solve. a nice home for me is more like a dream i need to fulfill. so thanx so much for reading my poem. i always like to write poems but i gotta know that English is my second language. so your comments is valuable for me.
Cooke Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 10:30 AM
a sad poem, with a charming finish i like this good poetry
Reyna Avatar
October 3, 2011 at 9:50 AM
thank youuuuu....
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