Emilia James Poet Rhyme

Deep Under the Sea

I was floating on water deep under the sea
Cold sun rays shone down I felt hot and quivery
A mermaid walked by with different sized legs
The battered dressed cod showed off his new kegs.

A bald octopus so furry, you could not see its eyes
The catfish all gathered and barked in surprise
The crabs running frantic sat perfectly still
Whales groaning their songs, laughed it was brill.

I started to feel well so went to the doctor
His name Davy Jones at top down at the locker
He told me I was dead; I felt so alive
We danced in the moonlight that morning at five.


Written 10th September 2021

For The Nonsense Rhyme Poetry Contest

Sponsored By Charles Messini

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Simon Hamill October 28, 2021 at 5:43 PM Hi emilia.congratulations on your placement.you beat me lol.told you yours was better than mine..But it was fun to do.take care.simon.:-):-) Emilia James October 29, 2021 at 4:33 AM Thank you Simon. They are indeed a lot of fun and this form is now one of my favs. Emilia : )

Eve Roper October 26, 2021 at 9:19 PM Congratulations on your winning poem,Emilia , silly and enjoying read. Hugs Eve Emilia James October 28, 2021 at 2:58 AM Thank you Eve, I'm happy that you enjoyed. They are a lot of fun and I enjoyed it too. Emilia : )

Tom Cunningham October 26, 2021 at 10:22 AM Back with congratulations Emilia. Hope you're well Tom Emilia James October 28, 2021 at 2:52 AM Thank you Tom, only just found out, so was a lovely surprise. Emilia : )

Charles Messina October 26, 2021 at 5:50 AM Love this, Emilia. Very clever and witty. Congratulations on your placement in my contest. Hugs Charlie Emilia James October 28, 2021 at 2:50 AM Thank you so much Charlie for my placement and for sponsoring the contest. I thoroughly enjoyed the fun form. Emilia : )

Simon Hamill September 11, 2021 at 4:50 PM Hi Emilia.good luck in comp.you made it all sound plausible.lol Take care.simon:):) Emilia James September 13, 2021 at 2:37 AM lol thank you Simon, a small insight into my ----- mind lol. Emilia : )

John Gondolf September 11, 2021 at 7:11 AM I enjoyed this clever playful write, Emilia, best of luck in the contest. Hugs, John Emilia James September 11, 2021 at 4:00 PM Thank you John, sure was fun to do and really enjoyed this form. Hope you weekend is going well. Hugs, Emilia : )

Lindsay Laurie September 10, 2021 at 4:50 PM Hello Emilia ... thanks for the morning smile with your reverse psychology poem Emilia - Lindsay Emilia James September 11, 2021 at 3:54 PM Your most welcome Lindsay, happy you enjoyed and it brought you a smile. Emilia : )

Tom Cunningham September 10, 2021 at 1:37 PM Lol, love your nonsense Emilia, best of luck. Tom Emilia James September 11, 2021 at 3:51 PM Lol, thank you Tom and best of luck to you too. Emilia : )

Jan Allison September 10, 2021 at 1:32 PM thanks for the giggles Emilia this was such fun to read:-) hugs Jan xx Emilia James September 11, 2021 at 3:50 PM Thank you Jan, I really enjoyed doing this form, my mind was going crazy with so much nonsense lol. Hugs, Emilia xx