Deep Space

Exploring deep space was a mus'
 For an astronomer named Gus
 But  his girlfriend saw red
 When to her he said
 I'd like to explore  Uranus
             
 Date: 4-25-15

 Contest Name: Make me Actually LOL

 Sponsor: Nina Parmenter
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Allison Avatar
August 10, 2016 at 1:03 PM
Lovely to read this again lol congrats on your win Jospeh:-) hugs Jan xx
Kendrick Avatar
April 30, 2015 at 12:32 PM
Reads like a winner..Thanks for stopping by with congrats..Sara
Johnson Avatar
April 29, 2015 at 11:51 AM
We have a winner! This is the epitome of what a limerick should be. The funniest and most delightfully juvenile one I've read on here in a while. Thanks for the big chuckle.
Andresen Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 11:51 AM
:))) Fun !!! - Well done, Joseph - // Anne-Lise :)
Das Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 8:15 AM
Clever limerick. #7. Nice wordplay. 7
Allison Avatar
April 25, 2015 at 7:37 AM
lol Joseph:-) Hugs Jan xx
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