Deep Sleep

The sun peaking through my room, Scratching at my back. With it's heat, Melting through my sheet. Oh please, Oh please. I plead, Leaving no faze on the lights waking me. Defeated, Leering myself up. Toes lingering to the floor, Waiting for the touch to send chills up my legs. Surprised by the warm heat, Taking my defeat, To a more deep sleep.
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Brown Avatar
November 28, 2011 at 12:37 PM
Congratulations on your win in Ed's "What makes you wake up each and everyday" contest Cali. Love, Carol
Quigley Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 11:02 PM
I think this pretty much sums up how most of us feel. Return to reality. Bummer. Congratulations
Kearley Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 9:13 PM
Congrats on the win :o)
Sweetheart Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 9:01 PM
Congrats on first place Cali for this marvelous poetry luv..
Johnson Avatar
November 25, 2011 at 8:24 PM
Congratulations on your big win. Love, Joyce
A   Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 1:31 PM
A well done poem..p.d.
Daniels Avatar
October 30, 2011 at 1:48 PM
thankyou.
Kendrick Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 6:08 PM
Enjoyed reading..Very descriptive..Sara
Kearley Avatar
October 29, 2011 at 3:03 PM
Ha Ha..Gave ME a smile...Your works are outstanding also.
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