Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Couplet

- Deep Ocean Tune -

Water droplets become liquid pearls, delicately balanced on milky white petals
Crowning gems sparkling jewels mist under lashes gleam

The beautiful white yellow sunlight all visible wavelengths of light refraction
Fluttering a rainbow promise under the bridge colors bright 

The goddess of fertility, wealth and comfort her name Dana-Ana
A crowning beauty sings whom stands in every dream

Sitting on deep rocks a treasure who combs every feeling
Sea cradled her and she heard Neptune whisper .... so beautiful you are

With golden glowing  fingers of emotions held captivated in her rays 
Filled with warm love when evening shadows and stars turns out in the sky





Written by L. Mcdaid & A-L Andresen :)
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Diane Christian June 9, 2015 at 8:04 AM beautiful written thank you for your kind feed back on my poem provision. God has really been providing so much lately, he always does but even more so recently, after repenting against spirit of fear, and breaking agreements of words people have said about me/over me that i become to think its true and I have even put my self down, thinking I was never good enough, but things are very different now, for I only need to focus on what God thinks about me im valuable to him that's what counts Anne-Lise Andresen June 10, 2015 at 1:40 PM - Nice that you enjoy Liams and my poem, Diane - thanks for the visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Phyllis Babcock June 1, 2015 at 3:15 PM A wonderful couplet Anne Lise. love phyl Anne-Lise Andresen June 2, 2015 at 4:17 AM - Glad you enjoy Liams and mine co-write, thank you dear Phyllis :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Funom Makama May 16, 2015 at 12:28 PM incredible piece! Keeping on giving us such lovely lines. #7. Happy weekend Anne-Lise Andresen May 16, 2015 at 12:38 PM - Funom, thank you for an enjoyable visit and a 7 at Liams and my poem: - Deep Ocean Tune - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Eve Roper May 9, 2015 at 11:39 AM Wonderful write from both of you, love all the beautiful colorful words as a paint brush flows smooth with liquin and oils on a canvas :~) hugs Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2015 at 12:03 PM - Nice that you enjoy Liams and my poem today, Eve - thanks for the visit and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Sara Kendrick May 8, 2015 at 3:48 PM A wonderful collaboration..Way to go you two..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Anne-Lise Andresen May 9, 2015 at 5:49 AM - Glad you enjoy our latest co-write, thank you Sara :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Paul Callus May 8, 2015 at 4:59 AM A delightful collaboration Anne Lise & Liam; charmed by the deep ocean tune and the imagery. All the best. /x/ paul Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2015 at 6:14 AM - Glad you enjoy Liams and my latest co-write, thank you Paul :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Liam Mcdaid May 7, 2015 at 3:35 PM your pen anne lise shone golden in this always a great pleasure writing with you dear pal wishing you a blessed beautiful weekend Anne-Lise Andresen May 8, 2015 at 1:26 AM - U 2, Liam :) - hugs & <3 // Anne-Lise :)

Donna Jones May 7, 2015 at 10:50 AM Was mesmerized by this lovely writing....wonderful job of combined work... Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2015 at 12:18 PM - Thanks for visiting and comments Donna - Nice to see you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Monterey Sirak May 7, 2015 at 8:18 AM Stunning! When you and Liam collaborate, magic arises. Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2015 at 8:30 AM - Glad you enjoy our latest co-write, thank you Monterey :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nette Onclaud May 6, 2015 at 12:55 PM dazzling beauty of a work laden with a sea of wonderment.. another worthy collab, anne.. how are you.. happy day with huggs Anne-Lise Andresen May 7, 2015 at 8:32 AM - I'm well, thank you for asking ..... and thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments, Nette :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

M. L. Kiser May 6, 2015 at 5:23 AM I love the ocean and this poem transported me there; it's quite a tranquil write. Anne-Lise Andresen May 6, 2015 at 6:02 AM - I love to sit on the land to see the ocean, but I am being terrible seasick on boat - Do not think I could have been a "mermaid" :))) - Thanks for the nice visit and lovely comments M.L. :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler May 5, 2015 at 2:22 PM My mind was flooded with images of wonder as I read these captivating lines... Another lovely write from you & Liam! Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2015 at 2:40 PM - Thanks Kelly, a pleasure to share with you :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bl Devnath May 5, 2015 at 10:49 AM An excellent beauty scene is adorned with soft aluminating colors shimering in the waving droplets of imaginary ocean's depth. So incredible piece. 7+ sure. Bye... Loved always, my lovely friend,bl Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2015 at 12:13 PM - Bl, thank you for an enjoyable visit and a 7 at Liams and my poem: - Deep Ocean Tune - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Emile Pinet May 5, 2015 at 7:39 AM It is well written with cleaver imagery and powerful emotions that whisper their presents from the page. Emile. Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2015 at 12:14 PM - Glad you enjoy Liams and my latest co-write, thank you Emile :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Constance La France May 5, 2015 at 7:37 AM Anne-Lise, beautifully pen, soothing and magical, you both did a great job writing this, 7, and thanks for visiting my poem, I have things... Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2015 at 12:11 PM - B.W. thank you for an enjoyable visit, a 7 at Liams and my poem: - Deep Ocean Tune - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Tim Smith May 4, 2015 at 5:28 PM great imagery A-L and Liam...lovely Tim Anne-Lise Andresen May 5, 2015 at 2:54 AM - Thank you, Tim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Kp Nunez May 4, 2015 at 6:50 AM Stunning imagery here, dear friends. Is Dana-Ana what you call the goddess of fertility in your country, Anne? A sweet name. I see a lovely tale unfolding with Neptune. I loved it! Hugs! Kim PS. Congratulations for week 2 in the POW Chart! Wooohoooo!!!! Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2015 at 6:58 AM - No, I've never heard the name Dana-Ana before .... but I have read it somewhere .... not in Norwegian, I do not know what she is called in Norwegian - Thanks for congratulations on POW ! - Glad you enjoy our latest co-write, thank you my friend Kim :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Jan Allison May 4, 2015 at 6:15 AM captivating write my friends a 7 as ever hugs jan xx Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2015 at 6:27 AM - Neptune whisper : .... thank you for visiting a 7 and comments, dear Jan :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Nandita Das May 4, 2015 at 6:01 AM Beautiful. Captivating imagery. #7 Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2015 at 6:25 AM - Dear Nandita, thank you for visiting a 7 and comments - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

John Williams May 4, 2015 at 4:21 AM A lovely piece, ..... Beautiful Anne Lise, The emotions you evoke,.....Can only increase............John Anne-Lise Andresen May 4, 2015 at 6:20 AM - Nice that you enjoy Liams and my poem today - thanks for the visit and comments, John - hugs // Anne-Lise :)