Deep Inside

Reaching.... into the shadows, deep into the depths, where secrets are kept. There is a sense of m y s t e r y A FEAR of the unknown. I reach inside.... aware... and ... alone. This is MY home. ....a.......graveyard....of......memories....... covered with moss watered with *t*e*a*r*s* Where no one hears the whimper of the wild rose this is a place where NO ONE goes.... but me D E E P INSIDE where ^s^e^c^r^e^t^s hide ====this====is=====my=====prison===
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Date: 7/20/2018 10:05:00 AM
No words could improve this one, and I love the way you typed it out. Beautiful!
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Date: 7/17/2018 1:52:00 PM
A super piece, Casarah; I had to favorite it. Thanks for the thrill of the work. Love this line: " This is MY home. ....a.......graveyard....of......memories....... covered with moss watered with *t*e*a*r*s*"
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Date: 7/16/2018 8:03:00 PM
Your words are well chosen and convey their meaning well allowing for a smooth flow of thoughts from line to line. A stunning and dramatic way to acknowledge your pain. Well done my friend, Emile.
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Date: 7/15/2018 10:31:00 PM
I love the feeling of trepidation the format lends to the emotional content of your superb poem Casarah. A deep reaching, profound poem that's compelling and showcases your creative poetic and visual talents. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
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Date: 7/15/2018 10:00:00 PM
This is great Cas, is the shape supposed to be something, I can't figure it out if it is...very intriguing shape poetry, visual layout is stunning!
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Date: 7/15/2018 9:41:00 PM
Amazing, Cas, you are so very talented..
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Date: 7/15/2018 6:28:00 PM
wow, the last line is a stunner!! I enjoyed "experiencing" this poem with its unique format, Casarah. Good to see you today.
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Date: 7/15/2018 5:30:00 PM
I love the presentation of your poem. Most attractive and visually appealing. And the words do not disappoint. Beautifully done, Casarah.
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:38:00 PM
One of your best Cas..I really enjoyed reading this..It carries depth within and intrigues me to dig beneath my own graveyard..See what I'll find..Awesome post.
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Date: 7/15/2018 4:17:00 PM
So deep, emotional and profound. Sensational poem Casarah. Elaine
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