Deep Inside

Reaching.... into the shadows, deep into the depths, where secrets are kept. There is a sense of m y s t e r y A FEAR of the unknown. I reach inside.... aware... and ... alone. This is MY home. ....a.......graveyard....of......memories....... covered with moss watered with *t*e*a*r*s* Where no one hears the whimper of the wild rose this is a place where NO ONE goes.... but me D E E P INSIDE where ^s^e^c^r^e^t^s hide ====this====is=====my=====prison===
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Krutsinger Avatar
July 20, 2018 at 10:05 AM
No words could improve this one, and I love the way you typed it out. Beautiful!
Kiser Avatar
July 17, 2018 at 1:52 PM
A super piece, Casarah; I had to favorite it. Thanks for the thrill of the work. Love this line: " This is MY home. ....a.......graveyard....of......memories....... covered with moss watered with *t*e*a*r*s*"
Pinet Avatar
July 16, 2018 at 8:03 PM
Your words are well chosen and convey their meaning well allowing for a smooth flow of thoughts from line to line. A stunning and dramatic way to acknowledge your pain. Well done my friend, Emile.
Ashley Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 10:31 PM
I love the feeling of trepidation the format lends to the emotional content of your superb poem Casarah. A deep reaching, profound poem that's compelling and showcases your creative poetic and visual talents. Warmest wishes always.. ~Susan
Hamilton Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 10:00 PM
This is great Cas, is the shape supposed to be something, I can't figure it out if it is...very intriguing shape poetry, visual layout is stunning!
Roper Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 9:41 PM
Amazing, Cas, you are so very talented..
Dietrich Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 6:28 PM
wow, the last line is a stunner!! I enjoyed "experiencing" this poem with its unique format, Casarah. Good to see you today.
Gauthier Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 5:30 PM
I love the presentation of your poem. Most attractive and visually appealing. And the words do not disappoint. Beautifully done, Casarah.
Chircop Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:38 PM
One of your best Cas..I really enjoyed reading this..It carries depth within and intrigues me to dig beneath my own graveyard..See what I'll find..Awesome post.
George   Avatar
July 15, 2018 at 4:17 PM
So deep, emotional and profound. Sensational poem Casarah. Elaine
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