'deep In Thought'

I sauntered along
the seashore 
thinking.

He walked
from 
the other side
fully engrossed.

Contest Name: Septolet
By: Wilma Neels



170720111730


Contest: Septolet
7th Place
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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Zzzzz Avatar
August 8, 2011 at 12:11 PM
Nice thoughts, poetically expressed. Congratulations on your win here! xoxo Robert.
Brown Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 11:49 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram Mehta's contest "Septolet" Wilma. Love, Carol
Horne Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 9:40 AM
Many congratulations, Wilma : )
Osita Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 12:51 AM
Beautiful picture.Congrats on your super win!
Williams Avatar
July 20, 2011 at 12:42 AM
congrats Wilma, great win, David
Onclaud Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 8:54 PM
enjoyed, wilms!..loads of smiling cheers to you for the amazing award!! :) huggs
George   Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 8:15 PM
Great thought evoking Septolet, Wilma. Many congrats on your SUPER WIN, Lainie
Dietrich Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 7:43 PM
wilma, YOurs was SO clever. I'd have given it in the top three!! Congrats.
Susan Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 4:08 PM
Congratulations on your win Wilma :)
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 3:53 PM
ah Wilma ..deep in thought got u a great big win in the contest my friend.. superior entry luv.. as all your poetry is...
Kendrick Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 3:29 PM
Congrats..Sara
Mehta Avatar
July 19, 2011 at 2:53 PM
My congratulations on this win in my contest, Wilma
Mehta Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 5:52 PM
RThanks for the entry to the contest, Wilma
Susan Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 1:22 PM
nice..I hope you met in the middle! makes me wonder what you both were thinking about! i want to know more about what happens...your poem ignites my imagination :) good luck in the contest!
Sweetheart Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 12:33 PM
a crescendo of luv Wilma..like a romantic novel my friend.. good luck in the contest.. oh so full of luv..
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:14 AM
Hey, this is cool. It sounds like a happy accident about to happen!!!
Dietrich Avatar
July 18, 2011 at 11:14 AM
I'm doing ok, Wilma. But I think my back is gonna plague me the rest of my life!!
Mehta Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 6:07 PM
Thanks for the entry, wilma
Falotico Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 12:12 PM
Excellent entry my dear Wilma,, I love the form and theme you have written here... a contest topper Im sure... love Michael
Ball Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 11:42 AM
This is really very good. Is it for the contest? If so I think it's a winner. God Bless, JB
Poet Avatar
July 17, 2011 at 9:02 AM
Very nice Wilma.Love it.Best wishes.
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