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For the Cemetery Contest of Constance La France

Greenwood Cemetery in Muscatine, Iowa - Find a Grave CemeteryMuscatine IA-Iowa, Chapel, Greenwood Cemetery, Vintage Postcard

"Across our childhood’s street we trod on carpet lawn and holy sod. We walked along where some had prayed. Where once we played, he now is laid." From my poem "Where Once We Played" There’s an old, large graveyard in my home town. We would not go there if chill winds would wail. In summer though its rows we would walk down. It’s also where we buried dear, young Dale. My brother Dale and I would ride bikes where we'd see tombstones from many years ago. I never dreamed so soon he'd be put there one winter day as down from sky fell snow. We’ve all moved on, and no one is around where bones of Dale have lain for forty years since he was placed into that cold, hard ground and we stood there – our faces wet with tears. Deep in Greenwood Cemetery, no hole holds him, for in heaven resides his soul.

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Date: 5/29/2025 9:04:00 PM
This happens. Sorry for your loss. Eventually we are all thought of after our deaths, remembering how we talked of ghosts, and thankfully we can look up and think good thoughts.
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Date: 5/29/2025 1:48:00 AM
so touching poem, i only go to cemeteries for my parents birthday, ooppps missed it yesterday, will buy flowers very soon, thanks poet
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Date: 5/29/2025 1:29:00 AM
A sad sonnet well written Andrea. Very sorry to read of the loss of your brother…. Beryl
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Date: 5/28/2025 10:39:00 PM
A magnificent sonnet. the subject requires it to be sad. I marvel how you handle rhymes Best for a win.
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2025 4:27:00 PM
Thanks so much, Victor
Date: 5/28/2025 8:41:00 PM
This is haunting and doesn't quite leave the mind so easily. Beautiful work, Andrea. "I never dreamed so soon he'd be put there one winter day as down from sky fell snow"
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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 5/30/2025 4:28:00 PM
Thanks, Paige. He was almost out of law school when a drunk driver killed him

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