Deep Hurt

Smiles and a happy heart smothered in joy.. A child lives in the moment.. The age of innocence.. Life untouched .. Simply magical.. Where dreams come true.. A child grows.. Life no longer untouched.. Why must the magic disappear.. Shattered dreams.. Broken promises.. A wounded heart .. Bleeding profusely from the pain Visions of dark skies.. Walking below a dark cloud.. Sweetness of childhood.. Melted into bitterness.. Shed bitter tears .. An open wound No healing.. Pain arises within.. Trapped inside there is emptiness.. Running through veins there is deep hurt.. Imagine blue skies.. Golden rays of sunshine.. Walking above the clouds.. No more darkness..

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Besma Riabi Dziri

Date: 10/24/2019 6:45:00 AM

Genuinely a reader relates to the Deep Hurt of yours, Robertina! We have to go through what bleeds the heart.. what puts a huge smile on the soul.. an everlasting process of growth and rebirth.. a continuous acquirement of deeper understanding and awareness.. after pain and sufferings.. a healing that seals wounds and builds a new empowered Self.. A wonderful rendition! Great pleasure to read.. Regards and blessings.

Heidi Sands

Date: 10/20/2019 1:47:00 PM

Well written! Let us imagine those blue skies Robertina :)