Deep Green Forest

Far into the deep green forest
there is a lady slipper
Blooming all alone in the trees
a delicate sight to see
As if a princess left it there
on the lovely walking path
When the prince swept her off her feet
a trace of love, still behind
Near gurgling brooks and waterfalls
splashes of joy all around
Here within the deep green forest
blooming love is to be found

Heidi Sands

2/4/22

Copyright © | Year Posted 2022



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Date: 2/5/2022 11:17:00 AM
You would make a great Navajo, i.e., always walking in beauty! Aloha!
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/5/2022 11:47:00 AM
LoL. Thank you Rico. I am fortunate to be surrounded by beauty here. I appreciate your visit and comment :)
Date: 2/5/2022 7:51:00 AM
The poem's rhythm is easily understandable, Heidi. I adored your illustration of this flower that resembles a pair of woman's shoes. Warm hugs.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/5/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Lasaad. I appreciate your comments and support. Hugs :)
Date: 2/4/2022 7:59:00 PM
Heidi, There's a wonder in green paths, and the poems that can truly find them. I'm glad yours did. You're best sentinel watching over the treasured few. -Richard
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/5/2022 8:03:00 AM
Thank you Richard. I appreciate your visit :)
Date: 2/4/2022 2:04:00 PM
Indeed they are delicate, feminine and colorful! Much enjoyed your description of this flower that looks like lady's slippers --aptly described by you as having been left by a princess. You bring forth the imagery of of brooks and waterfalls beautifully in this lovely nature poem.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2022 2:22:00 PM
Thank you Vijay. Nice to see your kind feedback tonight. I hope all is well :)
Date: 2/4/2022 1:21:00 PM
Deep green, brown, orange etc. are all so alluring. I guess the memory of earth in our DNA. "Here within the deep green forest blooming love is to be found" Beautiful! I think that when we quiet everything else, get back to our roots, closer to our natural source -- there is only love. Joe.
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Heidi Sands
Date: 2/4/2022 1:35:00 PM
It is nice to see your wonderful feedback Joe. Yes, our natural source. Thank you very much :)
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