Anne-Lise Andresen Poet Light Verse

- Deep Forest -

                           You need to go far, farther, even farther
                                  Over small streams and tracks
                 The moon is distant, but can be glimpsed through the trees
                           A moose lifts his head, a beautiful antlers
                                          King of the forest
                                 Can smell the forest and wildlife
                                   The fox howling at the moon
                                           Echoes in the woods
                                         Two yellow glowing eyes
                              It is the owl which are on the night watch
                                  Hope that all mice are safely home
                               The moon disappears behind the clouds
                                   Darkness falls, deep into the forest




28.05.2013
A-L  Andresen :)

(5th in the contest)

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Robert Nehls July 10, 2014 at 4:51 AM Ah, life in the forest, Anne-Lise. such a great place to see life as darkness falls. In many ways it reminds me of scenes in unfamiliar cities I have been. Always much to observe and learn. Very nice picture, my friend.... Robert. Anne-Lise Andresen July 10, 2014 at 4:54 AM - Yes, the forest can be exciting .... - Thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Robert. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Robin Davis March 15, 2014 at 11:14 AM Anne Lise Such a creative and imaginative write. A wonderful tale of a forests life and all the activity it sees. Thanks for the great comment on my Two Little Poems write. Anne-Lise Andresen March 15, 2014 at 11:35 AM - Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Robin. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jon A Cavanaugh October 17, 2013 at 10:47 PM What a wonderful glimpse into the forest. Great poem Anne Lise! Anne-Lise Andresen October 18, 2013 at 1:54 AM - Enjoyable with a visit from you. - thanks for taking the time to read my poem, Jon. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Shanity Rain October 5, 2013 at 11:16 AM This is truly a wonderful write , win ! see. There is something about you .Your Friend , Yvette. well new pen name Shanity rain. Congratulations ! Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2013 at 11:48 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation,sweet Shanity ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway October 5, 2013 at 7:17 AM Congratulations on your win friend Anne :) Have a blessed weekend to you and to your family. cheers!! :) Anne-Lise Andresen October 5, 2013 at 7:34 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation,Maria ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Skat A October 1, 2013 at 8:43 PM nice win............. LUV.............. SKAT Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2013 at 12:24 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Skat ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Donna Jones October 1, 2013 at 7:11 PM Congratulations Anne Lise...love the owl on night watch!!!!! Nice poem...... Anne-Lise Andresen October 2, 2013 at 12:23 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Donna ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Kelly Deschler October 1, 2013 at 5:00 PM I believe that I read this poem about a month ago. And, I love it just as much now, as I did then! Wonderful work, Anne-Lise! Congratulations on your win, as well! Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2013 at 5:58 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Kelly ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich October 1, 2013 at 3:01 PM this one was really really nice. Congrats on the winners list. Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2013 at 3:04 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Andrea ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Barbara Gorelick September 30, 2013 at 8:36 PM A lovely piece. Well done! congrats to you. BG Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2013 at 2:37 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Barbara ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Sandra Adams September 30, 2013 at 7:43 PM love the walk through the woods, you set the scene perfectly, and as I am reading this, an owl is singing from the trees outback...congrats on your win :) great poem Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2013 at 2:36 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Sandra ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Painted Hunter September 30, 2013 at 3:48 PM Anne, I enjoyed the basic nature and beauty of your poem. It was a great entry...thank you! Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2013 at 2:35 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Caleb ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Joseph May September 30, 2013 at 3:25 PM congrats on your win Anne Anne-Lise Andresen October 1, 2013 at 2:34 AM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation, Joseph ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2013 at 12:32 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation ! - oxox // Anne- Lise :)

Poet Destroyer A September 30, 2013 at 12:25 PM a lovely win...Anne..Linda Anne-Lise Andresen September 30, 2013 at 12:33 PM - Thanks for visiting and congratulation

Diana Freiwald September 17, 2013 at 2:13 PM Enjoyed the simplicity of this poem, is very soothing and good. :) Anne-Lise Andresen September 18, 2013 at 8:51 AM - Highly appreciate your visit and comments - Thank you, Diana! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Jim Joyce August 13, 2013 at 11:25 AM i loved yur imagery :)))..we all need more deep woods to go to :)) Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2013 at 11:47 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Jim. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Kelly Deschler August 10, 2013 at 3:54 PM Great imagery in this poem, Anne Lise! I felt like I was standing in a darkened woods as I was reading this. You write very well! Thank you for the nice comments, once again. It really means a lot! You have a nice weekend, too! Anne-Lise Andresen August 11, 2013 at 2:50 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Kelly. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Marquis Mc Mills-Cooper July 12, 2013 at 1:46 PM Oh my, kind of spooky LOL! I hope all the little mice are safely home. Great job! Anne-Lise Andresen July 12, 2013 at 1:48 PM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Marquis. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

James Marshall Goff June 16, 2013 at 8:04 AM Anne Lise...the only place i really feel connected....wish i could go more...jimbo Anne-Lise Andresen June 16, 2013 at 8:05 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you James!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Shadow Hamilton June 13, 2013 at 12:07 PM charming simply charming I love it Anne Lise this is excellent Shadow x Anne-Lise Andresen June 13, 2013 at 12:08 PM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Shadow!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Charmaine Chircop June 10, 2013 at 2:33 PM Gee defonty gives the feeling of a deep dark forest.Somehow you took me back to childhood memories when mum used to read Hansel and Grethel for me and those kids got lost in a deep forest.Excellent sweetie Anne-Lise Andresen June 11, 2013 at 1:30 AM - It's always enjoyable with your visit and your comments, thank you Charma!- oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Bukang Liwayway June 8, 2013 at 6:47 AM wow!! its like I'm watching a short film.. "The Deep Forest" very creative write my friend Anne..have a wonder day. cheers!! :) Maria Anne-Lise Andresen June 8, 2013 at 7:03 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Maria. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Joseph May June 5, 2013 at 9:45 AM great write Anne....thanks for stopping by...best wishes Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2013 at 10:44 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Joseph. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

Sayeed Abubakar June 5, 2013 at 6:57 AM No nice an imagery! A true poet you are. I like it very much. Anne-Lise Andresen June 5, 2013 at 7:03 AM - Thank you for visiting the deep forest, appreciate your comments Sayeed. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)

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