Deep Feelings
You make me
feel like a
waterfall;
adrenaline
rushing through
me, keeping me
still fresh, as
though time has
stopped. On the
other hand, I see
you like the full
moon; its rays
bathing my face,
tempting me to
steal the whole
of it for myself....
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