deep drift hiku
For Sir Brian Strand's 1401 Poetry Contest
5 August 2025
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___/ - \___ sleep underwater—
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________________|________ |_______
\ o_o_o_o_o_o_o_o_o_o_o_o_o______ / ...\______________________________ /
only bubbles tell the tale
o o o
o o o
o o o o
of shadows below.
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Copyright © Bernard F. Asuncion | Year Posted 2025
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