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Deep Dark

The sky was black and bloated no moonlight stealing through This night was seeped in eerie calm no silent breezes blew The fog crawled slow and lazy with wispy crooked fingers The void was deep and dark the kind that creeps and lingers You better stay inside if you feel the need to hide.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 9/22/2017 1:49:00 PM
Way to go Lenna, very nicely done. Blessings
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Lenna Walker
Date: 9/26/2017 12:17:00 PM
Thanks so much Pete :) !!
Date: 9/16/2017 4:41:00 PM
Very deep and dark... nice to see you back
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Lenna Walker
Date: 9/26/2017 12:18:00 PM
Thank You SS :) !!
Date: 9/8/2017 2:20:00 AM
Lenna, I am so happy to see you back here. I missed you :) Love the couplets, they give a feeling of something ominous and not very pleasant!
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Lenna Walker
Date: 9/9/2017 12:16:00 PM
Thank You Darren !! The night did seem a bit ominous, hence those last lines :) I pop in now and then and although I don't comment much any more, I do enjoy reading what others have posted. Have a beautiful day my friend :)
Date: 9/6/2017 1:11:00 PM
You definetly wrote this well . The reader is able to feel it, Lenna.
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Lenna Walker
Date: 9/7/2017 10:32:00 AM
Thank You Heidi, I was hoping for that :)

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