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Deep as ocean

It was raining outside a girl was crying inside Everyone thinks she is a rock No one knows silence is dangerous as dark Eyes are deep as ocean Something in it is hidden What we know about its motion dark is more, silence widen It was humid outside But she was lonely inside Everyone was as a pair No one thinks she needs a care She was weak, trying to be strong Everything was like a storm Sailors could not survive She is trying to dive

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Date: 7/17/2024 8:27:00 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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Date: 7/18/2024 2:56:00 AM
Thank you so much
Date: 7/16/2024 9:34:00 AM
Your poem has slot of emotion for this poor girl
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