Deep and Empty

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this heart seeps
at each tiny crack
longing to be healed

pain gathers in the chambers
lost among the echoes
of voices I once heard

darkness grips my eyes
hands reach forward, back
wanting something I can’t have

searching, I find it
though hoping I wouldn’t
but there it is, waiting, tormenting

where is it written
that the sand shall
absorb the blood fallen

that tears
are never seen
when wept inside

that time can count 
on something
but I can’t

even these words
a scribbled mess
of thoughts are wasted

ink faded in the sun
that no longer shines
where it once did

oh, I have seen things
and I have felt things,
but nothing will ever be

as this tree I lean on
all alone, roots deeply travel
only finding earth

and as I dig deeper
the space facing me invites
and I think about it

a pit to place
my heart, to alleviate 
the pain

and like this space
deep and empty
so am I
Copyright © | Year Posted 2019

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Hamilton Avatar
September 25, 2019 at 9:07 AM
Wow Chris...I thought your pen only leaks romance...but sadness and melancholy just...wow...loved every word full of meaning not empty, glad these are old buried feelings...looking forward to your sunny writes!
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September 25, 2019 at 9:55 AM
I was using a different pen this time. :) Thanks John, I am thrilled you enjoyed this lonely tale.
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September 24, 2019 at 4:13 PM
Words and thoughts are not wasted ~ they land somewhere... We are blessed when yours land in our hands. Be well, Chris ~ tough day here, too.
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September 24, 2019 at 4:31 PM
Thank you my friend. Tough days do come, don't they? I truly do appreciate your kindness, especially coming from a talented and special poet like yourself. It means a lot to me.
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September 24, 2019 at 3:40 PM
What can I say? My words seem so feeble beside this masterpiece: As image-glorious, conscience-pricking, and SOULFUL a write as can be. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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September 24, 2019 at 3:42 PM
Thanks so much Gershon. Just casting out a few memories of a low point that I seem to revisit from time to time.
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September 24, 2019 at 2:37 PM
Through the dark lonely chambers this piece speaks to the readers, deep thoughts in this one, tears wept inside are never seen... impact these words have verse after verse... excellent write my friend ... different from your softer tones but definitely has that wow factor! Hugs :)
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September 24, 2019 at 2:50 PM
Thanks Sandy. Your wonderful thoughts mean a lot. No, not so soft this time but sometimes soft isn't what's flowing from the pen or the mind. I appreciate all of the kindness and the friendship you show me.
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September 24, 2019 at 2:21 PM
- Poets parts beauty, delight, passion, thoughts and feelings ... we read and enjoy ... and create an image of the poet ... but, often ... the truth we will never know ... - A wonderful poem in its sadness, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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September 24, 2019 at 2:34 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Indeed, poems can show many faces and every once in a while may just show the true one. I appreciate you my friend.
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September 24, 2019 at 2:12 PM
Wow chris! You make ones heart long for the things you write! Gorgeous write my dear friend!;) you write of sadness yet the beauty it holds .... I'm speechless!;)
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September 24, 2019 at 2:19 PM
Thank you Brenda, just one of those days you know. Things happen and spark memories that maybe you wished you didn't remember. I appreciate you my friend.
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September 24, 2019 at 2:08 PM
Oh Chris, this is excellent. Well expressed! I agree with Jennifer about those lines too. I know what time of aloneness and loss feels like. May there be healing for the longing to be healed :)
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September 24, 2019 at 2:18 PM
Thank you Heidi. I know you have and I am sure we all have at one time or the other. It hurts but eventually the pain eases, I don't think it ever goes completely away but that is life I guess. Your kind words are always welcomed here
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September 24, 2019 at 12:55 PM
A very deep but far from empty write you have penned Chris - "that tears are never seen when wept inside" Wow "A pit to place my heart to alleviate the pain ----- and like this space deep and empty so am I". a sad intense poem, but certainly the heart you speak of, is a loving, paining heart, not empty! Hugs, Jennifer.
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September 24, 2019 at 1:17 PM
Thank you Jennifer. Just writing out a few emotions and feelings. I appreciate your kind words and I am thrilled you liked this one so much
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