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Deep and Empty

` this heart seeps at each tiny crack longing to be healed pain gathers in the chambers lost among the echoes of voices I once heard darkness grips my eyes hands reach forward, back wanting something I can’t have searching, I find it though hoping I wouldn’t but there it is, waiting, tormenting where is it written that the sand shall absorb the blood fallen that tears are never seen when wept inside that time can count on something but I can’t even these words a scribbled mess of thoughts are wasted ink faded in the sun that no longer shines where it once did oh, I have seen things and I have felt things, but nothing will ever be as this tree I lean on all alone, roots deeply travel only finding earth and as I dig deeper the space facing me invites and I think about it a pit to place my heart, to alleviate the pain and like this space deep and empty so am I

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Date: 9/25/2019 9:07:00 AM
Wow Chris...I thought your pen only leaks romance...but sadness and melancholy just...wow...loved every word full of meaning not empty, glad these are old buried feelings...looking forward to your sunny writes!
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Chris Green
Date: 9/25/2019 9:55:00 AM
I was using a different pen this time. :) Thanks John, I am thrilled you enjoyed this lonely tale.
Date: 9/24/2019 4:13:00 PM
Words and thoughts are not wasted ~ they land somewhere... We are blessed when yours land in our hands. Be well, Chris ~ tough day here, too.
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Date: 9/24/2019 4:31:00 PM
Thank you my friend. Tough days do come, don't they? I truly do appreciate your kindness, especially coming from a talented and special poet like yourself. It means a lot to me.
Date: 9/24/2019 3:40:00 PM
What can I say? My words seem so feeble beside this masterpiece: As image-glorious, conscience-pricking, and SOULFUL a write as can be. Bravo! ~ Gershon
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 3:42:00 PM
Thanks so much Gershon. Just casting out a few memories of a low point that I seem to revisit from time to time.
Date: 9/24/2019 2:37:00 PM
Through the dark lonely chambers this piece speaks to the readers, deep thoughts in this one, tears wept inside are never seen... impact these words have verse after verse... excellent write my friend ... different from your softer tones but definitely has that wow factor! Hugs :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 2:50:00 PM
Thanks Sandy. Your wonderful thoughts mean a lot. No, not so soft this time but sometimes soft isn't what's flowing from the pen or the mind. I appreciate all of the kindness and the friendship you show me.
Date: 9/24/2019 2:21:00 PM
- Poets parts beauty, delight, passion, thoughts and feelings ... we read and enjoy ... and create an image of the poet ... but, often ... the truth we will never know ... - A wonderful poem in its sadness, Chris :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 2:34:00 PM
Thank you Anne-Lise. Indeed, poems can show many faces and every once in a while may just show the true one. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 9/24/2019 2:12:00 PM
Wow chris! You make ones heart long for the things you write! Gorgeous write my dear friend!;) you write of sadness yet the beauty it holds .... I'm speechless!;)
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 2:19:00 PM
Thank you Brenda, just one of those days you know. Things happen and spark memories that maybe you wished you didn't remember. I appreciate you my friend.
Date: 9/24/2019 2:08:00 PM
Oh Chris, this is excellent. Well expressed! I agree with Jennifer about those lines too. I know what time of aloneness and loss feels like. May there be healing for the longing to be healed :)
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Date: 9/24/2019 2:18:00 PM
Thank you Heidi. I know you have and I am sure we all have at one time or the other. It hurts but eventually the pain eases, I don't think it ever goes completely away but that is life I guess. Your kind words are always welcomed here
Date: 9/24/2019 12:55:00 PM
A very deep but far from empty write you have penned Chris - "that tears are never seen when wept inside" Wow "A pit to place my heart to alleviate the pain ----- and like this space deep and empty so am I". a sad intense poem, but certainly the heart you speak of, is a loving, paining heart, not empty! Hugs, Jennifer.
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Chris Green
Date: 9/24/2019 1:17:00 PM
Thank you Jennifer. Just writing out a few emotions and feelings. I appreciate your kind words and I am thrilled you liked this one so much

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