Deep

Whilst moments fill the space,
Slaps of regret stink in it's coffin,
Hopes frowning in silence

Oh! Shouts of freedom
Bundled to nothingness,
Express fear and lack
Deep rivers tear the sights

Styles of sweet selling savour
Needless take the desires of the cross
Emotions buried in the blank books,
I feel deep in you
Sorrow my friend
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Mcgee Avatar
September 19, 2022 at 9:58 AM
I was deep into your words, feeling their pull. Especially love the first stanza. Please share more.
Krutsinger Avatar
December 2, 2021 at 11:46 PM
This metaphoric write suggests to me that you have penned hundreds of poems. Where are they?
Nsa Avatar
December 20, 2021 at 5:50 AM
I will send more Karen, Stay tuned
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