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Whilst moments fill the space, Slaps of regret stink in it's coffin, Hopes frowning in silence Oh! Shouts of freedom Bundled to nothingness, Express fear and lack Deep rivers tear the sights Styles of sweet selling savour Needless take the desires of the cross Emotions buried in the blank books, I feel deep in you Sorrow my friend

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Date: 9/19/2022 9:58:00 AM
I was deep into your words, feeling their pull. Especially love the first stanza. Please share more.
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Date: 12/2/2021 11:46:00 PM
This metaphoric write suggests to me that you have penned hundreds of poems. Where are they?
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Date: 12/20/2021 5:50:00 AM
I will send more Karen, Stay tuned

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