Deeds Good and Bad

DEEDS   GOOD   AND    BAD

I will concede 
That  a  friend  in  need 
Is a friend indeed
Cos he does a man a good deed

Some  men  are harried
When we wish to get married
We shouldn’t  be worried
Too soon we’ll be buried

Englishmen  are always too tea-d
USA   guys are often coffee-d 
Such drinks for a man -  a good deed
But too much  and  he’s  expiry-d

And  I have also read 
Of people using lead  
To bash some  man’s  head
A  bad deed instead.
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( Monorhyme,  but  reversed rhyme in last stanza  )
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Anderson Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 10:53 AM
lol. marvelous! looking forward to reading more of your work
Devonshire Avatar
December 30, 2010 at 8:07 AM
VERY cute and witty, Sydney! Surely this will be a winner. Love, Carolyn
Mehta Avatar
December 28, 2010 at 3:03 PM
You are always superb in the rhymes that comes quite natural to you keeping the humor and wit intact, Sydney
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